!Holy shit!
that's all I can say,
I literally don't know what else to say, just that this is, no joke, the BEST book and by FAR the BEST fanfiction I have ever read. Im not kidding you should let this and Phantom of Thruth be published, like right now! I just finished it and im crying in the corner right now cause it was SOOO GOOD (there should be like a million O's in this, but I didn't want to bore you), I was literally praying that new parts would just magically appear, but they didn't (sadly), I waited so long to read the last chapter because I was refusing to believe that it would end, I still cant believe it. I know you must have gotten so many of these, but I just cant put in words how MUCH this story means to me and how much I envy and respect you for writing this. Like seriously it was PERFECT, from the first word to the last, and I NEVER say that, NEVER. There is literally NOTHING I would change. You wrote Danny PERFECTLY I didn't even have to imagine him to know he was there, I mean how crazy is that?
I just wanted to give you a list with all the characters in this novel (I'm just gonna call it that, because IT SHOULD BE!) and tell you every little detail of how you wrote them PERFECTLY, them but then I realized, that NOBODY has ever managed to write characters like that, and you did it FLAWLESSLY (im using my adjectives, YESSS! - how the HELL I manage THAT)
Back to your (waiiittttt) QUINTESSENTIAL (there's no way I wrote that right) Writing. I just want to say you wrote Shannon SSSOOOO well, that when I went back to check on how she looked in the show, I completely forgot she WASN'T actually in it, like thats got to say something. Every bit of you writing was filled with soooo much talent and emotion and love. The story was PERFECT, the characters perspectives were PERFECT, just everything was. I still can't tell you how AMAZING this story is and I just wanted to to say;
THAAAAANNNNNKKKKKK YOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUU, for writing this and making my life complete and for not giving up and making every chapter better than the last. Please dont ever give up writing, you are SOOO talented. You are blessed with such an amazing gift, please publish a book AS SOON AS POSSIBLE and tell me the name so I can read it, cause I cannot wait. I'll go check out your other stuff right now:) I promise you, if you do, you will be one of the best and be remembered for generations.
I know you'll probably never see this, since it's been like what, 6 years or sum. But GGIIIRRRLLLL (or boy, im sorry I have no idea) I just cant stop saying how TALENTED you are!
I want to praise you a million more times, but I dont think I have enough space (does this thing have a word limit?) No idea, anyway dont EVER let anybody tell you otherwise, just show them this and I promise they will shut up, huhuhuhhu
I am SO sorry for bothering you with this 10 page long essay, but I hope you believe every bit of it, because I did not exaggerate. I LOVE this novel so much, I'll NEVER forget this masterpiece,
thank you, again :)
I hope you have the BEST life and never stop believing in yourself. i'll remember this for the rest of my life...
with so much LOVE, Kora

I would die for Shannon. I don't know if she's a figure from DP canon or an original invention, but I love her and Harley too

I'm in utter misery, dear author. and yes, i'm loving every second of misery this fic puts me through. also, i misread the chapter number when i started reading, and thought there were far fewer chapters in this. so i have an even longer story to read! but i also have an even more heart-wrenching story to read. holy crap this fic is changing me on a molecular level

i can't even type coherently, i'm in pieces right now. if you listen closely you can probably hear faint shrieking from a mountaintop in the USA, that's me reading this fic

I went to recommend this to some friends that also enjoy DP, only for them to say "WE ALREADY READ THAT AND WERE EQUALLY EMOTIONALLY DEVASTATED BY IT" so congrats on infecting my entire friend group with this incredible series!

you know when maddie turned down the heat and Danny went supersonic? that's me right now

oh god oh god oh god oh god oh god oh god oh god oh god

once again, i can only say, this poor poor baby boy

LET'S GOOOO i'm so stoked!

Jack! I love you imperfect people with complicated emotions! Thank you for another chapter!

Thanks so much for the awesome chapter!

Another excellent chapter! Thank you so much for writing and posting another chapter!

Amazing chapter! Hits every single time. Thanks for writing and posting it!

Thanks for another chapter!

Love this and all Your works that I’ve read so far