Reviews for We're A Family
Ghost Dragon Master chapter 8 . 5/2
Ok so in this fanfic Dash's parents are doctors... I wonder what their responses would be if they find out their son is a good for nothing bully and scumbag. I mean lets face it, with the way Dash was acting BEFORE he saw Danny transform if he saw Danny lying in the middle of the park with those injuries I can only foresee two things happening. One: Dash walks away laughing at Danny's injuries. Two: He beats up an already injured Danny some more and THEN walks away laughing.
Great chapter 20 . 2/4/2015
Ok, I'll read the rewrite. Just one thing, delete this story, because I dont like stories that will not be updated ever again. I prefer that they disappear than stay forever incomplete, sucks the fan out of me.
Awesomenesss-sama chapter 20 . 11/19/2014
Pfft, copy cat, Team Phantom is MY thing
Guest chapter 9 . 5/26/2014
This isn't overly bad but the chapters are rather short and mostly fillers. Some of them would be better if made into a single chapter rather then several. Also for a story featuring Danielle there is a startling little amount of her thus far. Out of the nine chapters only one chapter had Danielle in it- aside from the whole premonition Danny had. Nine chapters out of nineteen and only two scenes of Dani so far. This, to me personally at least, would have been better if you had set up Danny and Dash's friendship already and showed how Dash became friends with him in a flashback perhaps after finding Danielle. However it's a good story despite this and keeps well in character with Danny and the others.
RockStarForever1998 chapter 19 . 3/1/2014
update update
deadline.050168 chapter 19 . 1/9/2014
Great Story :-)
WriterxDani chapter 19 . 1/2/2014
Great Job! Just is it over? I'm just not so sure now...
Shadowprice chapter 19 . 12/18/2013
this is good you should make more
Nicole The Dragon Rider chapter 19 . 11/5/2013
This fanfic is FUCKING AWESOME! Please update soon :D
The Dark TARDIS chapter 19 . 10/27/2013
Oh ma gosh! Dani is sooo cute! Oh jeez... I sound like my sister. Any way, don't give up! Never give up! Keep writing till you have a concussion! Then see a doctor... Best of luck! If you don't keep writing? I'll sent the box ghost after you! Untill then...
Never fear the impossible.
ShadowDog34 chapter 19 . 10/23/2013
I really like this story. It's original and I can't wait to read more!
Funnybombninja chapter 19 . 10/21/2013
Dani phan chapter 19 . 10/15/2013
keep up the good work! :]
AJ chapter 19 . 10/14/2013
awwwwww so sweet!
4Ever Fanfiction chapter 19 . 10/13/2013
Another amazing chapter my friend; keep up the good work.
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