|Reviews for The last horcrux|
| tearsofbreaks chapter 1 . 3/13
I would really like to see a continuation of this... the pregnant husband part, that would be a sight to see, especially if you add in the mood swings. lol how will old voldy react? and Lucius trying to get on Harry?
edit: "your current error" ...'should be added'
1. across Harry's naked "falt" stomach..you meant flat?
2. "tho" we need to have 'a' proper bonding...you meant although?
...there are other punctuation/grammar problems, sorry, I'm to lazy to type it out :D
SEQUEL? PLEASE? come on, there is so much potential to this story!
| Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 1 . 3/4
| ShadowFire91 chapter 1 . 1/11
Ok, that was fast.
Nice idea. Maybe the next time you could let the development be a Little bit slower, because now its kind of unbelievable, because Harry was fighting for years against him and now within minutes he give everything up? Doesnt Sound that realistic.
But nevertheless was it nice to read.
go on like this.
greetings ShadowFire :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
write more, it's a good story.
| kvdsouza chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
| ViZiO chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
I like the idea of your stories but you need to slow down a reread them a few time to remove the kinks. There are to many spelling and grammar mistakes for your story to be read correctly.
| HarryRemusSirius chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
awwww, are you sure its complete?
| majestic.beauty.sealed.in.ice chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
wow... that was hot? lol really it was! jajaja thanks for sharing this its marvelous!
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
I like it!
| bloody kitten chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
well i cant believe you left it like that! there could have been more but its not my story so yeah but still could have been more!
| RangaHotMrsBlondDR chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
this was really interesting. I'd love to see you explore what would happen when Harry's friends find out that he is married to Tom; even more so what Tom would do when he meet them and not have to kill them (Unless Harry forgot to put them on that list) hehehehehe.
| Mickey chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
I liked it
| darkblue91 chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Love it XD
| bloody kitten chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
please update soon