|Reviews for Until It Hurts : Troigan|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/4
This story you are writing is absolutely amazing! The way that you describe their feelings, makes be believe that I’m a character in this story experiencing what is going on. You have an amazing talent! Never stop writing!
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/21/2015
LOVED LOVED LOVE LOVED LOVED! UPDATE.
| Meli Lullaby chapter 2 . 10/4/2014
| Addicted2Spoby4Life chapter 2 . 6/1/2014
My teacher said energizer bunny and I thought of this fanfiction. :)
| Mel chapter 2 . 10/13/2013
| spobettes chapter 2 . 9/30/2013
Shhhh. Hear that? It's me screaming my head off because
I don't know if you are planning on doing part 3 but please consider it!
| lovefortvshows chapter 2 . 9/15/2013
Ok, so after a cold shower, hahaha, not true, but seriously even though I think I'm still not recovered after this reading I'm going to write my review.
Firstly, when I read the AN and I saw M rated, a big smile appeared in my face and I felt butterflies in my tummy. Then I began reading and literally felt the urge to throw up literally, I swear. Can you imagine just for a second that they kill Toby's character and Keegan has to leave the show! A shiver goes through my body every time I imagine that. WHAT HORROR! And if you add to that that he's in love with Troian and that would separate them and break his heart, their hearts... I'm bawling my eyes out agaiiiiiinnnnn. I can't bear even imagine it! :'''(
But then he decide to make the most of their last scene and mmmmmmm. I'm a perv and you know it! hahaha. I know that scene by heart but you can imagine if they were really feeling that desire and they have to hold themselves back?! Someone turns off the fire alarm, please? Hickeys included, in front of the crew! CAN YOU NOTTTTTTTT?! dfjhasd;lfj;aoweihf;odlvncdfjas;ildfjoi;aewusdf[oe ruho;dilvh;hjarsd;f oiyewahsod;fich
And then he couldn't even pretend to hurt her...AAAAWWWW my baby, so sweet!
He was so upset, he was going to lose the love of his life, but then that knock on the door and that sensation of relief filled me. And the rest it's just indescribable, ok, NO WORDS CAN DESCRIBE YOUR CAPABILITY FOR PICTURING THEIR HOT SCENES. PERFECTION is nowhere near as good as this OK?! And she took the first step, SHE DIDDDDDDDDDD. ANd "Keegan collapsed back against the counter(...)Keegan thanked every god in existence for the fact that Troian often went around braless and that today was one of those days(...)"Oh god, Troian… you feel amazing…(...)"Fall for me… I've got you. I love you. Please, Troi, for me, fall for me." he whispered, referring to the edge she was clearly teetering on, as he kissed her face all over, her neck, her shoulders, her wrist. (ARE YOU KIDDING?)"How many times are we going to do this tonight?Until it hurts?"
"Maybe he would have to say goodbye to Pretty Little Liars, but he knew that he had gained something much more long-lasting with his departure" OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
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My reviews suck. I know I can't focus and make summaries, but I'm a sucker for your Spoby&Troigan fiction and the scape/paradise they mean in our daily lives and the way they make me feel. 33333333333333333333333333
PHEWWWW this one was PHEWWWWW babe! CONGRATULATIONSSSSSSSSSSSS, it's so worth it! xoxox
| xXHeartUnderFireXx chapter 2 . 9/15/2013
This chapter was just...wow! If I considered the previous one a piece of art, then, I don't know what to say about this...this is worth a Pulitzer prize, and I'm not exaggerating even a bit. After all, I'm not a person who gives fake compliments; this really is, in my opinion, your best Troigan story so far.
I'm running out of words again, because this is the state your stories bring me to. *takes a deep breath* But I'm going to enumerate my favourite parts anyway.
Not very frequent a fanfiction story makes me emotional, but this one managed to put me in all the states the characters were put. I felt sadness when Keegan suffered in silence and wasn't even allowed to open his poor heart to his best friend. Then I felt a physical pain when Keegan was trying to act professional and couldn't manage to pretend he was choking her; who could blame his sweet soul anyway? You can't hurt the most important person in your life, even if you're pretending it. When she came again to his apartment and they hugged and Keegan told her the truth, I felt so relieved and happy. I'm not going to mention what I felt in the end, because it's obvious. Those last scenes...omg! My feelings exploded like fireworks.
When you mentioned on twitter that this chapter would be a steamy one and therefore was going to get an M ranking, I mentally jumped and screamed and I wasn't disappointed at all. But then again, you bring steamy stories to another level. You didn't cross the line, but wrote it in such a poetic and unique kind of way. 'Fall for me… I've got you. I love you. Please, Troi, for me, fall for me.' I was breathless, speechless and numb after this scene. My fangirl heart is beyond happy.
'He had no idea what he was in for. But he couldn't wait to find out'. Such a perfect line.
Thank you, thank you, thank you. You never cease to amaze us with your writing skills. Now sending a virtual hug and a box of chocolate to you, 'cause you deserve them, and much more to be honest.
| xXHeartUnderFireXx chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Words can't express how much this story brightened up my day (or should I say night, since I've read this chapter at around 4 am, anyway...).
Firstly, the scene in Spencer's room was so fantastically written. I also loved how you described the things Keegan had to endure so the scene would be perfect. Then, when they were in each other's arms and they felt that time stood still...*feels all over the place* And I laughed so hard when Keegan, in his 'head in the clouds' kind of state, exited the room in the wrong direction. Oh, and then they started to use last names, that was such a cute thing.
Secondly, you described so well their feelings during that tough scene. "Damn Keegan, what are you made of, marble?!", surely Troi's line breaks that tension that formed between them, consciously or not. 'Until it hurts' doesn't only refer to physical pain that Keegan is put through, but to the state their feelings for each other brought them to. I'm just...speechless, because this metaphor is simply perfect.
Then, if this story wasn't amazing already, Troian comes to his apartment, falls asleep in his arms, plants a soft kiss on his lips...how am I suppose to be in a normal state after this? What is more, you brought sweet Minin into this story.
I could probably go on and on in telling what I loved most about this story, but the truth is, I loved everything and besides I ran out of adjectives and adverbs. This has clearly crossed the line of fanfiction (as everything you write); this is a piece of art, this is like one of these books you have on your bookshelf and read them over and over again.
Thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to read something as wonderful as this piece of art (I'm not calling it story anymore) and excuse me for not reviewing it sooner.
| lindsayandhalstead chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
This is soooo good! I love all of your Troigan stories, every single one of them and they are my favorite by far. Your fics are my guilty pleasure :)
I wouldn't mind if you wrote more... you know if you ever get inspired again? I think there's still plenty of material, but omg well done really! Loved every word of it!
| liberal4peace chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
That. Was. Incredible. The idea of Toby actually being gone KILLS me. Great fic. Really, it might be your best so far.
| liberal4peace chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Incredible! Also, I love that you brought Minin in. :)
| prettylittlefanfic chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
Another amazing story! I love your writing
| TheVelvetDusk chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
So beautiful...and I loved how you had Keegan questioning the writers and their method of doing things-so true! Thanks for such amazing storytelling, you are very talented :)
| Spencer Salvawhore chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS JUST WOW I CANNOT DEAL WITH THIS TRACEY IT WAS THE EPITOME OF HOTNESS AND WOW I CANT THINK COHERENTLY BUT ILYYYY