Reviews for The Tale of the ancient: Rebirth of a legend
Doctor Dandy chapter 4 . 10/7/2013
"Hearing the man's thanks sparked something in the blonde ancient, it was something to do with that genuine, heart wrenching appreciation that sparked a fire previously doused within him, a fire that, in one fell swoop, consumed his soul and revived the feeling of attachment, albeit a little, that he had so ruthlessly buried centuries ago."

This is where I leave. Some advice in parting: As is, this is not very well written. The way you write is fractured, and your scenes reflect this. Lastly, you have way too much dialogue mid fight. Do you seriously think that any enemy is just going to stand there and respect that they're having a conversation?

- Thorndsword
theguh otsutsuki chapter 4 . 10/7/2013
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Guest chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
A bit dark for my tastes but good nonetheless keep on writing
guisniperman chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
I don't have the brain power left to tell how awesome this story was after reading this chapter.
Lightningblade49 chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
looks like they had some fun
goddragonking chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
great chat and hope for more updates soon
ultima-owner chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
the music makes it so epic
Reaper74Kill chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
epic as all ways update soon
joe chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
please continue the story soon it is good
firehelm chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
OHHHH niceeeee update soon!
RoyalTwinFangs chapter 3 . 9/29/2013
Not bad.
Pyrusblade chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Naruto seems bored with life
Guest chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
update this story soon its good
The Amendable Snow Freak chapter 3 . 9/27/2013
This is great! Post soon!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/27/2013
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