Reviews for The Tale of the ancient: Rebirth of a legend
dbzsotrum9 chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
The sweet and kind Mirajane was always a part of her personality, even when she was a bit "bitchy", but her sadist and evil side is still in her, (which was shown when she humiliated Jenny and did S&M play with Erza)... she just lost her tsundere side which hide all her happy points (she's still hurt you with a smile)

so Mira went from Tsundere-ish to Yandere-ish... she's basically just calmer and shows her caring side more, but she's still technically the same (other than being calmer all her other personality traits remained, maturity aside)
ultima-owner chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
that's a great first impression
Thorndsword chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
It's an okay chapter, but you really need to work on your comma usage.

- Thorndsword
Kinunatzs chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
damn cliffhanger! anyway nice chapter and more pls
theguh otsutsuki chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
Next chapter please
firehelm chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
OHHHH Yes this is exactly what I was looking for. Pure OP action. You are the best at expressing how Overpowered Naruto is :) Keep it up! Cliffy...update soon please :)
SPark681 chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
Hmm wonder who is bowing to Naruto if I am reading this right gonna be interesting to see how Fairy Tail deals with this new situation. Anyways keep up the great work!
goddragonking chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
great ch and hope for more updates soon
Have a Little Feith chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
You should know: you can make fixes before you post it, but only if you edit it in the document manager. If you already know that, sorry for sounding condescending; it wasn't intentional.
Lightningblade49 chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
lol Ownage to the Max and a very submissive Mira.
Cant for the reaction when the clone dispels and they see Naruto's face.
ExecutionerKain chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
Great chapter
Ramen junky chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
ooohhh mira is going to get it. great job.
F1ct10nb4Ll3r85 chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
great chapter man can't wait for the next one and see narto kick some ass
perses7x chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
wow...looks awesome...update soon
SPark681 chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
Hmm nice story gonna be interesting to see how this turns out keep up the great work!
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