Reviews for Star Effect: Deep Space 9
marisares76 chapter 9 . 11/20
Shuttles have an alternate power source, the impulse drives, they have built in nuclear fusion reactors its how they work. They use part of the plasma from the fusion reaction as exhaust propellant. It's real nifty that. It obviously wouldn't be as powerful but it would work for what they need, besides they could add another fusion core or 2 if they needed more power.
marisares76 chapter 5 . 11/20
Sorry, but I seriously, seriously doubt that KINETIC barriers would stop a transporter beam seeing as its pure energy and thus has no mass, thus no kinetic energy to stop. I have no problem so far with your grammar, etc. and I do thank you for the story but you need to take a minute and reread what you wrote and think about it a little. Its these obvious things that disrupt the story.
marisares76 chapter 3 . 11/20
Huh, uh, well, they know they are in an alternate universe and not the past, so how exactly CAN they alter the timeline, you know, seeing as they aren't actually from the future or, well, part of the indigenous timeline to begin with? I can see some Starfleet Captain talking about not contaminating that universe or some such non-sense but interfering with the timeline isn't possible since they don't know or have anything from the indigenous timelines future to interfere with. The fact that they are from the future of their universe has no bearing on the matter, besides, unless they can leave right then they are going to interfere in that universe, whether they know it or not, so they might as well not worry about it and simply use they're best judgement. Sorry if I'm a smartass but the Prime Directive is one of my pet peeves as it is, to me it's way over done and, at times, does more harm than good. Don't get me wrong I'm for the spirit of the directive but it's been expanded to the point of cruel idiocy, that at times, makes no sense at best and others is down right evil. Anyway, like the story thanks
Guest chapter 10 . 9/7
Interesting very intriresting I both imaged posting garic inva situations where he can’t lie and ever one already nows all his secrets
Worldmaker chapter 6 . 12/11/2020
Your chapters are way too short. You could have combined the last three into a single chapter.
David Falkayn chapter 1 . 8/27/2018
Sorry, you had me until the fourth chapter.
Chronus1326 chapter 41 . 3/15/2018
Did you just kill Javik with the rod? Or rather allow him to sleep until the end of time?
Chronus1326 chapter 36 . 3/15/2018
You made Garek and Bashir fags? Really? Why on Earth would you do that? Should have done Worf/Sheppard, lol.
Chronus1326 chapter 32 . 3/15/2018
Who gives a shit about some Harry Potter story? HP's a chump.
Chronus1326 chapter 31 . 3/14/2018
Yeah, Vega was well written.
Chronus1326 chapter 30 . 3/14/2018
Yes! We finally have O'Brian working on the Defiant! I can't wait until she's upgraded and combat ready!
Chronus1326 chapter 29 . 3/14/2018
At the AN after this chapter you asked for a review of your writing. The writing is good, coherent and flows well. The characters are well developed, and act as they should; the dialog itself is particularly well written, and the paragraph spacing avoids the wall-of-text. The earlier chapter containing many short stories that took place 'earlier' felt like an 'authors band-aid' used to clear up things that the author changed after the chapters where it would have happened we're written.
Chronus1326 chapter 18 . 3/14/2018
So...revision. handheld phasors vs infantry barriers:barriers win hands down. Shipboard phasors vs shipboard kenetic barriers:phasors Trump? WTF?
Chronus1326 chapter 15 . 3/14/2018
Should have used the phasor rifles, not the weakling beam ones.
Chronus1326 chapter 14 . 3/14/2018
So the Normandy suffers greatly, during an enemy attack, while the Commander is fraternizing in bed with subordinates? Are you serious? Worf should have just shot Sheppard (your shitty Sheppard, not the real one). You don't need Hero Sheppard since we have the plot all written out. Face-palm.
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