|Reviews for Course Correction|
| Almu chapter 3 . 2/28
Now I'm happiñy crying. This is beautiful. Thank you very much.
| DElena all the way chapter 3 . 2/19
Im really happy that I started to read your fanfiction. At first I was not sure if I should. The way your storyline went surprised me. I liked it. Really good work. Thanks.
| mrsl488 chapter 3 . 1/30
This is by far one of the best fan fics I've read. It's never an easy task to take major character deaths and create an amazing tale of romance and learning to live life, even if it takes an extra go around.
In this particular fandom it's also a hard sell to put Stefan at the forefront of a story and even more so have him be the narrator and therefore for all intents and purposes the main character. But, despite his moments of absolute douchebaggery in the show, I adore Stefan and loved listening to his voice tell this story.
I applaud you for telling a beautiful love story for Damon and Elena with both characters basically absent from the page. It's a true testament to your talent as an author and I'm shaking my head that I've not read any of your work before, though I've seen your name many places.
And while this was a love story, it was also a story of growth and discovery for Stefan and I appreciate that so much. I'm also a true believer in the concept that Katherine is Stefan's doppelganger and not Elena (who could possibly believe otherwise?) and I love that you gave them a HEA, even though he had to kill her first, which lends itself to the truth that the love between Damon and Stefan is the most important relationship of this story and more broadly, of the show. That Stefan was willing to kill the love of his life based on a promise to his brother demonstrates a deep, abiding love that surpasses everything else. Your Stefan said early on that Damon would forsake him for Elena, but I'm not entire convinced and glad that , at least in this story we didn't really need to find out.
Thank you for sharing such an original, wonderful story with us.
| elenasempathy chapter 3 . 1/19
THIS IS SO AMAZING. OMFG. THE END WHEN THERE REUNIION IT WAS SO OC. crying. i died when damon had a similar red mark on his cheek 'petrova woman' sdklfmslfsmf so freaking good. I found this in someones favorites list and i noticed your name hahaha thats when i realize i also read the left coast. small world. loved it though. oxxoxooxxo
| monygrl chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Just found this fic, and yea, sobbing like a baby (at work). Thanks for that, BTW.
| CharlSmith chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
I'm sobbing. Truly, truly amazing story. It was simply incredible, beautifully written and heartfelt, so emotional, so real. Loved it. Wow.
| mochacoke92 chapter 3 . 11/4/2013
TEARS TEARS AND MORE TEARSSSSSSSSS! GOOD LORD I'VE LITERALLY BEEN COOPED UP IN THE SAME SPOT, UNABLE TO SHOW MY FACE BECAUSE WHY THE HELL HAVE I BEEN CRYING NONSTOP?! IDK IF ANY OF THIS EVEN MAKES SENSE BUT I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS AND I THINK YOU CALLED PERFECT ENDGAME. OH, AND DID I MENTION HOW MUCH I ADORE THE FACT THAT YOU WROTE THIS IN STEF'S POV...GOSH ALL THIS DEFAN AND DELENA AND STEFERINE IS WAY TO EMOTIONAL. Enjoy the caps lock ;p and thank you for writing this.
| Winterfell78 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
This is by far my favorite fic! It's so beautifully painful! I CAN NOT GET OVER IT! I cried sooooo much! Thank you for this beautiful piece of art! 3 I LOVE IT!
| Sylviemdi chapter 3 . 10/24/2013
I can't even...you made me cry so hard...beautifully sad...
| sharpie78 chapter 3 . 10/24/2013
I am sobbing! This was great in that tragic way that Titanic was great. You are so talented!
| sharpie78 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
| Jeremy Shane chapter 3 . 10/18/2013
Super Chapter & More Please
| morvamp chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
So... remember forever ago when I promised you that I would read this because of that one except that gripped my heart and squeezed the living hell out of it? Well, I'm finally making good on that promise. At least for this chapter so far. Unfortunately I have to start getting ready after I write this review because I have dinner plans, but after that first chapter, there is no way I'm leaving it there. I HAVE to come back and read the following two chapters.
But okay... onto the actual review.
You have managed to do the impossible. You actually made me feel that fire that's been missing for these two for quite some time now. You made the devastation and annoyance and cheesiness and utter disappointment of their season 4 relationship fade away and shed some light on why I originally fell in love with this ship. You interconnected things that desperately still need to be connected in a way that feels accurate and believable, all the while finally having these other characters show some respect for the (anti) hero of the show. It was remarkably refreshing and relieving to read what you wrote so far, despite the pain, which you layered on beautifully. I cannot wait to get back to this, cry a little more, and see how everything wraps up.
Fantastic job so far!
| wolverine99 chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
Wow, you are awesome at making me cry. I love how you had everyone reform around Damon on the otherside. The part with DJ was so touching. The story was wonderful start to finish. Great job!
| wolverine99 chapter 2 . 9/30/2013
Chapter 1 my heart broke for Damon. This chapter it broke for Stefan. To have Stefan come full circle with Katherine...brilliant! Great job!