Reviews for Falling For The Ghost Of You
Mitli chapter 13 . 9/13
Listen, ur story is good. I like the plot, and it's well written. But...colored? It's nice that u put an afternote of not wanting to be racist, but that is still highly offensive. It's just as bad as nigger or negro. And I get that it's not meant to be, but write black, or African American. U don't even have to put that if ur scared people are still gonna b offended. Just put the other male or something like that. But please, don't put colored. There is a myriad of other words that can describe somebody's skin tone, and colored should only be one of them on a drawing that a 3 year old made. Please, if ur reading this comment, go back and edit that out. It's not that hard. For some reason I'm not logged in, but if u feel the need to discuss this with me, my username is Mitli. If you did read it, thank you, and please consider changing that part of your story.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/1
I can’t read this anymore. With every chapter your spelling and grammar get worse.
Garisfrey26 chapter 42 . 6/24
I... have never been this closely invested in a character before. Have refrained from commenting because I recently pick up this title and decided to read it and we'll to be honest I'm not sure I should have. This story has filled my thoughts changed my moods made me enraged at Danny and Liz's plight and even wish I could be added to the story so that I could change something or do something to make their lives just a bit easier. I knew that she would die when clockwork came to her... you said it outright I had hope but something told me that this wouldn't be a fairy tale ending. Your story has true potential to become one of the best series that could come out it is extremely deep and somewhat dark. It inspired feeling in me that I honestly had no idea I was capable of having especially to characters in a story...
That being said I swear by kratos Thor spawn trigon and any other video game legend that you care to name, if you stop this series I may have a fucking heart attack because I absolutely loved the book. I await the sequel with bated breath my dear author please don't make me wait too long.
DP forever chapter 32 . 4/8
That was the best chapter ever
Earthly Entity chapter 42 . 4/4
This was so painful, I cried in public, and people was wondering why I was crying
Guest chapter 17 . 12/21/2017
reading this fanfic is like going though an emotional roller coaster
Spoopy Astro chapter 42 . 11/29/2017
blackpan26 chapter 42 . 9/29/2017
i swear if you don't bring Liz back to life i will kill youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! !
Guest chapter 43 . 4/13/2017
Hahaha, actually that whole author thing you put in the story made me smirk cause I love irony.(I forgot about that earlier, but one of the peoples' reviews you put on this chapter reminded me of that.) Even if it's kinda cruel(even to myself). It was kinda funny. Though I was still crying after that. So that little thing you wrote in there to jab the knife in harder didn't work with me~! ()ノ" BLEHHHHHH~!
Although... That little sneak peak reminds me of those dreams they had. Is this another dream Danny has? Oh, right. You won't answer that cause you're kinda a sadistic author, lmao. (Not to mention, this is, yet ANOTHER really late review. But whatever.)
Don't know if I'll go read the sequel right away now or not... (Probably not.. I have a hard time reading sequels right after the first books in fan fiction for some reason.) But I'll definitely check it out eventually. I just hope that my heart won't be ripped out AGAIN at the end like this time. 8U
Guest chapter 42 . 4/13/2017
"How emotional was that ending?"
-deadpans- You freaking ripped all our hearts out, Piper...
Guest chapter 41 . 4/13/2017
Err, I know this is probably extremely late(like all my reviews), but, well... You asked for a heart to heart, so you're gonna get one.
To be honest, I've heard about this story before, seen it in the DPxTT group before, but the whole OCxDanny thing always chased me away. But since I've been pretty bored and read most of the good crossover fics for DP, I decided to give this a chance. And boy, was I glad I did.
I really liked how you started the fic. It piqued interest immediately. I also liked how they were just friends in the beginning, and gradually went from friends to lovers. (I was still a little uncomfortable with how fast that seemed to go when they were with the Titans, but it was easy to ignore since they were friends for a long time. And people going through those sort of things together grow close. Really close. I also tend to forget time skips happen from time to time, lol, so... Yeah.)
Oh man, and I LOVE ALL YOUR PLOT TWISTS! Even if they drive me crazy, lol. I just LOVE how you put all this mystery into this story. It makes me want to think and make theories on what's REALLY going on. To me, THIS is how stories should be.
Guest chapter 40 . 4/13/2017
HO BOY... Were the evil Sam and Tucker robots, too? Well. Dang. O_O I feel a little bad for Sam and Tucker as well... They're also prisoners, of sorts... But wait, who was Jordan then? His eyes were glowing green, weren't they?! GAHHHHH I KEEP TURNING IN CIRCLES AND CIRCLES TRYING TO FIGURE THINGS OUT! (Though I was vindicated when rude Robin turned out to be a robot like I thought, and was switched around the first rescue attempt, like I had also guessed... The juries' still out on why Danny is having Prophetic type dreams... Did CW give him powers or something? Or did they just develop for some strange reason?)
WHERE IS THE JUSTICE LEAGUE WHAT THE HECK?! I THINK they'd notice at least SOMETHING that was going on... Especially after Danny and Liz were on the news! RAWRFGHGGGGGGFGGGGGHHHHHHH! (ノÒдÓ)ノ彡
Guest chapter 38 . 4/13/2017
Hahahahaha, I knew there HAD to be a catch when I read those... Compromising sentences being said. Cause Liz DEFINITELY wouldn't have done anything like that with BB, even if he IS cute.
Guest chapter 27 . 4/13/2017
Uh oh... Liz and Danny are dying, aren't they?
Guest chapter 24 . 4/13/2017
Okay, I don't know if I'm the only one... But aren't their dreams REALLY DANG SUSPICIOUS? It's like somebody put something in them to dream dreams that that somebody wants, just to torture them. Of course, it really could be from their messed up psyche.. But it's still suspicious.
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