Reviews for you've been running up hills and running too slow
vinnie20 chapter 1 . 3/24/2018
You totally have to write more chapters! That was actually pretty good, and I like the P.O.V.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2017
Oh wow. This is really makes me realize how vulnerable all the characters are. Sometimes in the show, it's easy to forget that they're all just teens... great plot and message :D
LegitMistress123 chapter 1 . 6/17/2016
Hey-o! I LOVE this story. You put such passion into it. It feels like I'm not reading "you" (like i feel in so many of these first-person POV's). I feel like I AM Artemis. I feel her passion.
Always keep writing. No matter how depressing this may be (in a good way), I will always remember this story.
Wellifdk chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
bruh. the feels. seriously though this is absolutely awsome and you have always been amazing at capturing emotions of characters and also you write spitfire very well. you are a very talented writer.
Artemis Jane chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Where's the rest?! I want more pleeze
kanjimaru67 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Oh my god. This was so beautiful, so wonderfully written. I almost wish it wasn't complete, just so the magic could continue for another chapter. Bravo!
Gabriel's Trumpet chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
This is beautiful. The push-pull way you've written Artemis's feelings towards Wally works wonderfully with her character, and you manage to play up their insecurities really well without going overboard with them.
Liana Legaspi chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Sad but beautiful. Marvelous job as usual. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
I am a mess of emotions right now and none of them are happy and I both hate and love you for that
PopCulturist chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Excellent. You really get artemis, she's hard to write convincingly, but you do it wonderfully. Great job.
Kamil the Awesome chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
So, uh, why doesn't this extremely well written cry-fest get a second chapter?
kimberleyblaize chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Wow... just wow.
Breathtaking. :)
meksters chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Ooh, second person narrative! I feel like it's a style that not everyone can do well, but you did a great job!
Awsomaniatica chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Oh wow. Just wow. I cannot say much else about this except really good and it had me holding on to her feelings too...
arrowflash chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Thats good...but I'm confused about it. And is this just a one shop or is there more chapters coming.