|Reviews for Max and Ruby's Boating Adventure|
| Staraline Sane12 chapter 1 . 3/7
I really like the story. It reminds me of when I was younger. :-)
| Whaaa chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Was...this meant to be serious? There are a lot of loopholes. Where did Max get a camera? What's with Danny's mood swings? And when did Ruby aquire physcic powers? If you proved that Roger can say complete sentence without saying "Uh huh" then why did he only talk once?!
Well, loopholes or not, we got a good laugh out of it! I would consider changing the genre from adventure/drama to humor/parody.
Thanks for the laughs! -
| scarlet creed chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
the story is really good I'm sorry I'm to lazy to log on but loved it