|Reviews for Fading Away|
| Ydream08 chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
So many things are happening at the same time! I like how you started the story with a high pace and ended it with a mysterious air. Your writing is also a very good example for a third person point of view and can be read very easily and I had fun while doing it ;)
The only thing that caught my attention in the story is the explanion for the egg not hatching. Yes, It is a nice idea of explanation but if Cole is the reason to it why wouldn't it hatch sooner, didn't he have the egg WITH HIM for ten years?
Anyways... It is a great story to read, keep up the good work
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Awesome story I can't wait to read more, and I think I already know who the champion is