Reviews for Books, Movies, Boys
NathanEryk chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
I don't like it when people say they only experience love, because...
*deep breath*
A magician who was a god and the son of himself, came down to the mortal realm two thousand years ago and was was murdered. He then rose from the dead to clear us of our sins, sins we are born with because a rib-woman, Four thousand years before a virgin had a child, came from a dust-man and ate a fruit that gave her knowledge, which God said was bad, because a snake, with legs, told her to. The snake actually being Satan, a disgraced angel, who was also created by god as well as the rest of the universe in a week, and he had a nap on Sunday or something.

It disheartens me.
-NathganEryk
meezzy chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Aw, that was a nice story. Good job!
CRaZYLoVE71 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
'We are carefree, trusting and innocent children of God.'
Thank you for this message. So simple :)
Let God Bless You.
XD
hdf chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Very beautiful oneshot. Simple yet true delivery of a message that is necessary and relevant. Personal revelation given for others to see really puts meaning behind words people may have already heard but have ignored. Keep writing :)
FFcrazy15 chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Beautiful!