Reviews for Help from the Broken ONE SHOT
Brianna716 chapter 1 . 1/5
This is so sad, but it's a nice ending. James was such an evil person and I'm so happy that Edward was able to save her.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
That was so sweet and so beautiful even though James was a monster love did prevail and Bella got their heaven ever after that's great THANK YOU LOVED IT AND YOU TOO
twilightobession chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
LOVED this story! You did an awesome job!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
You didn't mention a trial. Did James get a long prison sentence?
MDtwiwriter chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Excellent story that is frightening because it happens far too often.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
I loved it it broke my heart because for some this is not fiction but truth and I have my own things happen and now I try to keep my girls from men like that thank you it was heartbreakingly beautiful
SqueakyZorro chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Brilliant portrayal of Bella's state of mind in the beginning, when she still thinks James "loves" her. Also great that she went from victim to a survivor who can help others. I would love to see another chapter or two exploring that stage of their relationship in more detail - there had to be a few bumps since the kind of brainwashing James did on Bella doesn't just disappear without a trace. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Thank you for sharing this story. Rough reading but it needed to be told!
alisapay1 chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
This was good - thanks for writing it! Mwah!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
Broken Bella and broken Edward come together. They see in each other what they don't see in themselves. They learn about each other and there are feelings there. Bella has no idea of what is wrong. She is physically and mentally hurt by James and Edward is the one to show her that she should not be treated like that. They both have rough pasts but learn to trust each other. They learn to love each other. The knew that the only way in this life was to be together-forever. Thanks for the short story! Keep writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
At the end I was reading through my tears, I was that touched by what I was reading. Maybe more people will read your story and learn from it! Thank you!
Darcyfan14 chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Such a sad and story and beautiful end.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Such a sweet ending for their horrifying experiences at such a young age. Glad they come out of it on the other side, many dont :( James really was a piece of work taking advantage of a young impressionable girl and abusing her like that. He definately would have killed her and then gone on to kill others. Thks for sharing, Debbie
pudget12 chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
I am at a loss for words, this is a truly touching story and as the mother of a daughter that survived an abusive relationship all I can say is thank you.
Wishing you all the best,
Kelly
irishnlove2shop chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
Great message! Loved the story.
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