Reviews for Help from the Broken ONE SHOT
Sara aka Nikki Black chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
Thank you for sharing it.
Nrbl1 chapter 1 . 3/6/2016
Loved it...

Would have loved to have heard what had happened to Edward tho

debslmac chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
:) loved this
yvonne72 chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
This story was an amazing story
Thank u so much for writing this
rubell chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
still curious as to why I haven't read all of your stories
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
Gah! The feels! Great story!
Brianna716 chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
This is so sad, but it's a nice ending. James was such an evil person and I'm so happy that Edward was able to save her.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
That was so sweet and so beautiful even though James was a monster love did prevail and Bella got their heaven ever after that's great THANK YOU LOVED IT AND YOU TOO
twilightobession chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
LOVED this story! You did an awesome job!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
You didn't mention a trial. Did James get a long prison sentence?
MDtwiwriter chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Excellent story that is frightening because it happens far too often.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
I loved it it broke my heart because for some this is not fiction but truth and I have my own things happen and now I try to keep my girls from men like that thank you it was heartbreakingly beautiful
SqueakyZorro chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Brilliant portrayal of Bella's state of mind in the beginning, when she still thinks James "loves" her. Also great that she went from victim to a survivor who can help others. I would love to see another chapter or two exploring that stage of their relationship in more detail - there had to be a few bumps since the kind of brainwashing James did on Bella doesn't just disappear without a trace. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Thank you for sharing this story. Rough reading but it needed to be told!
alisapay1 chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
This was good - thanks for writing it! Mwah!
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