Reviews for Avengers Initiative: Percy Jackson
lauenlives chapter 10 . 7h
The fact that Nico was smoking a home made joint made me absurdly happy…

Thank you
Wistim's daughter chapter 11 . 11/14
Please update
Aviendhaphiragon chapter 11 . 9/17
Keep going. Don't abandon. I really could care less that its not BOO-adherent.
Mrcoolguy104 chapter 11 . 8/28
Did you abandon this story
Guest chapter 11 . 6/8
make more plese
TheWritingReader chapter 11 . 6/2
Nico said Natalia instead of Natasha. Other then that, awesome job!
Axcel chapter 11 . 6/1
You've improved. This is a much better length chapter, too. Looking forward to more! :D
Axcel chapter 10 . 6/1
He should point out that the storms and earthquakes at Greece were his doing. Oh, and what he did in Alaska.
Axcel chapter 7 . 6/1
For the record, Percy is both Greek and Roman, as is Jason, which is why they were chosen for the swap.
Axcels chapter 7 . 6/1
What trails are you talking about? I thought you misspelled "trials" but A) he wasn't arrested and B) you consistently spell "trails" instead.
Axcel chapter 6 . 6/1
I thought it was pretty original, personally. I don't see resemblances.
Axcel chapter 5 . 6/1
Wait, F16? Doors? Lulwut?
Axcel chapter 5 . 6/1
Wasn't Loki the one who said not to mention Percy's past? Well, I guess with their apparent friendship-ish-thing it'd be alright.
Axcel chapter 4 . 6/1
Much better, shame about the short length, but there wasn't much else that could be put in, I suppose.
Axcel chapter 1 . 6/1
You use comas too much and in the wrong places. Well, the right places too, usually, but also wrong ones. A lot.

Not particularly bad, though kinda rushed. Hope that was only because it was an opening. Not much to do or say in an opening, after all.
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