Reviews for We Gotta Fight to Make it Right
Guest chapter 27 . 7/13/2015
I love you for having Dom actually man up and keep his promise to letty! THAT is what he should have done in the DR-listened to her and treated her like his partner, his equal. Nice to see him learn his lesson. :-) :-) :-)
Guest chapter 26 . 7/13/2015
Awesome and hot!

I just wish you would show that letty is the only woman that affects Dom!

It seems too one sided she we read:

"Dom smirked; he loved how much he had an effect on her. Letty was always a person who liked to take control and was never a person to accept charity or ask for any help. But only Dom could change that little fact, there was something about Dom that made Letty feel vulnerable and to have serious loss of control of her body."

It's all about how Dom is the only one who makes letty vulnerable. How about a little symmetry?! Dom Should be equally weak for letty!
Guest chapter 25 . 7/13/2015
Letty needs to start acting like a grown woman and future mother and not a street rat who fights with anyone at the drop of a hat. She's not 16 anymore. She needs to start acting like it!

Dom was clearly pushing Elena away. Let him stand up for himself with Elena!
Guest chapter 24 . 7/10/2015
Mia's reasoning that if Dom knows letty is pregnant he won't do something stupid to get himself killed only reinforces the idea that Dom doesn't love Lettt herself enough to stay alive for HER!

It would be so much more romantic if Dom could show letty that he loves her and is going to do anything to be with her whether she is pregnant or not!

Pe. It was nice to see Lettt apologize to Suzuki. Lettt has come across as a needlessly hit tempered bitch. Nice to see her show some empathy for once. You KNOW that if their positions had been reversed, Letty would have yelled at or punched Suzuki For a rude comment like that...
Guest chapter 23 . 7/10/2015
Thank you for reinforcing the stereotype of women as catty, truffling, weak, and jealous over a man. The only women in your story who arent sister to Dom are bickering like jealous teenagers!

There are no positive woman-woman interactions as all. I get the sense that the only female friend letty has ever had is MIA-because Mia will never be a sexual rival for Dom.

Sigh. I hate sterotypes where women devolve because of a man.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/10/2015
It's hilarious that letty wasn't ready to have the baby for herself. Only after Dom said he wanted it. And ps. They can't get married because things are too serious but it's fine for letty to be pregnant while they are going this shit?! That's even worse. They are putting their unborn baby's life at risk!
Guest chapter 21 . 7/10/2015
Why can't Dom ever man up himself. Why does he always have to be told what to do. A real man, one who is ready to be a husband, would take the initiative in his own.
Guest chapter 20 . 7/10/2015
Letty getting pregnant is like her being trapped by Dom. If she gets pregnant and stays with Dom he should always wonder if she would have stayed with him if she weren't pregnant. A baby should come AFTER they are in a solid relationship !
Guest chapter 19 . 7/10/2015
Unplanned pregnancy isn't sexy or good. Especially in a couple that can barely keep it together. Babies only add stress and break failing relationships. People to get together and stay together "for the child" usually end up sad and angry with each other and the child suffers.

Ps. Do neither of them know how to use effective birth control? They dated for like 10-15 years wi Out letty getting pregnant. Why now? Bad timing. And if Dom really loved letty like he says he does he would make sure she is ok '(physically and emotionally) before getting her pregnant.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/10/2015
Sigh. Of course you took the character of Elena and turned her into some jealous psychopath. Unnecessary.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/10/2015
What is the rush to have a baby? They arent even married her and the day after he propelled they were acting like letty bickering kids. Give them a chance to be married and show that they can stay married and have a stable relationship before letty gets pregnant!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/10/2015
The basis for their whole relationship seems to be lust and sex.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/10/2015
Letty is a grown ass mid 30s woman by now. Don't paint her like some fees from girl cowering in front of her large boyfriend. She's acting like a child here and not an adult woman. A woman who was part of Owen s team for two years, who can hold her own in a fight, drive under trucks, shoot a gun, jump into a moving vehicle. She is a woman who can take care of herself not a simpering little miss.

And isn't this the woman who agreed to marry Dom a few hours ago? Both of hem are acting like a teenage couple instead of an adult pair. Dom is literally ordering her around, "commanding" her to sit. She's not his dog. She is supposedly his soulmate and the woman he wants to marry.

Letty using sex all the time is getting creepy. They had sex yesterday mitigated by Letty before Dom really apologized to her. Now they are fighting and she wants sex. It comes across as very shallow and manipulative.

Their whole interaction about sex is so wants is but he doesn't. He wants it but she doesn't. Sex isn't some weird power play game. Sex isn't going to fix the mess that is their relationship.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/10/2015
Since when is letty a hot head? I thought in the movies DOM was the hothead. Making all the crazy decisions. Letty was the one who didn't want to pull the last truck heist but only did so because Dom wAnted to. Not a hothead. She seems more like the rational one. Sure she scared off the skanks that Dom was always flirting with (again another example of how well Dom didn't treat letty). But she didn't scream or hell or fight. She just makes them leave with a few words.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/10/2015
Brazilians speak Portuguese. Letty presumably speaks Spanish. Much more useful.
Lettt shouldn't be angry with Elena. Only Dom if he doesn't cut ties with Elena. It is not Elena's fault that Dom left letty and that she almost died getting him back. It's Dom's fault. It's not Elena's fault that Dom chose to make a life with her but never did with letty. And Dom didn't even have the guts to break up with Elena himself. He let her do it.

Elena should just walk away from Dom and find herself a good man!
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