Reviews for Bold Gestures |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So I still have the outtake to go, but I really needed to leave a review for this story. It was amazing! I love that finally after reading so much Mobward/Mafiaward I found one that finally felt realistic. Bella's decision to be Edward's goomah was so in-keeping with the time. There really were very few options for women and I think you showed that beautifully. I read so many stories where Bella refused Edward everything and he just took it. This was so much more realistic. Also people moaning about how Edward was i.e. not romantic, not respectful etc he made more grand gestures than most men in the current era! Very well done and thank you so much. I felt fully immersed in this and I loved it. The pairing of Rosalie and Edward was great too, as Carlisle did intend for Rosalie and Edward to get together in the books and it never worked - so I thought this was great fit. I'm off to read the outtake and see what else you have written. xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() You seriously slay me with each version o in every story you pen! Can you see I’m just burnin’ through all of them right now ahah. I also like how you write this true to what would be happening during this era in time. Especially how you write in the vernacular of the era too. I love me a badass Mobward with the voice to boot. Ungh and all the super steamy sexy times were so yum to read too! Love how kinky this duo is. Thank you for this tough as nails baby doll Bella and smokin’ Gangstaward 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing! Most of the characters are terrible people (Edward being one of the worst!), but very much products of their time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely Lovely Story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man! What a journey, truly. Loved your asshole Edward and head strong Bella. Even Rose was soo good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! the best story I've ever read about mobward. Thanks for this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story and i am so glad i did. This has to be one of the best fan fiction stories i have read. You are an incredible writer and i hope you continue to write more stories. |
![]() ![]() I love this so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Explains a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally realistic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He’s 35 and Bellas what? 18? Nah, pervy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the detail u provided for the house! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! |