I think the audience would want a lot of chopping up of villains at this point. That's what villains are for- a legitimate excuse to use lethal force and not be convicted in court for it. There's a lot of grounds here for some good old fashioned death by sword!

This looks carefully written! I just wish I had watched more of the show.

LOVE IT BUT NEED MORE CHAPTER

PLEASE keep writing I love it so far and I think you should make lucy's dad seem like the bad guy but he really has nothing to do with it

Totally loved it! spectacular

You should keep this story, I really love the plot, as for ideas, nothing quite comes to mind...I wouldn't (personally) want Lucy to experience anymore pain after the pain she's receiving now, you know, other than the fact that she'll have open up to others afterwards, and that can be a rough thing to do. Anyways...update when you can, please. ;3

Lucy's dad sucks... NATSU! Where are you?

It's a really sad story so far but it sounds good please continue with this story :)

PLEASE UPDATE! finaly. a story with a serious and dark subject matter. been lookin for somthig like this forever.

Lucy-nee! Who will save the blonde? Update again!

i guess it was okay but, maybe you should add something quite happy so that the readers won't be pissed with this kind of start

Off to a good start! Suggestions would be to make future chapters longer if possible. Other than that its good!