Reviews for Puzzle of my Heart
Tarbecca chapter 1 . 6/30
Recommended this story in the Flash Back Fic Dive over at ADF!
SLKerouac chapter 42 . 5/2
Loved this outtake! So much had happened since the announcement of Edward and Bella's marriage and her pregnancy. It was a time to celebrate Edward's birthday. The family was all there and friends. Bella had done so much for Edward's party. It was something she wanted even with her being at the last stage of her pregnancy. The party went well. Everyone had a good time and now Edward and Bella were alone. Getting ready for bed Edward had to check on Bella until her heard her. When he got there it was time to get to the hospital. It would be a night to remember. Bella delivered the baby girl. It was a birthday present that he would always love. Bella gave him a family that he always wanted and especially on his birthday. Loved this ending!
SLKerouac chapter 40 . 5/2
Loved the story! It was a long journey for both of them. Bella had to learn to trust again after having it destroyed by Jacob. Edward learned patience after Bella told him what happened to her with Jacob. He had to let her take the lead at her own pace. They both had so much insecurity regarding their "relationship" because they never really told each other what they felt. So much happened in the end. Bella reading the letter and opening the gift that Edward had left for her. Her flying to Chicago to get to Edward. Edward being surprised that Bella had come to him. Their coming back together and finally talking to each other. Edward's surprise and then the wedding for just them. Bella surprise for Edward that she was pregnant. Then the telling of the parents about being married and the pregnancy. It was their life and they were doing it the way they wanted. Thanks for writing this story. Please continue writing!
blondferretgirl chapter 41 . 4/10
Loved it!
Keep on writing!
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 42 . 3/21
Awwww, such a good fic! Thanks!
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 36 . 3/21
Wonderful reunion. Uh, what about the trail of clothes leading to Edward's bedroom?
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 35 . 3/21
Awwww, that was perfect. I knew her putting off telling him until his return from NO would be that catalyst for drama. So, she's gonna fly out there now?
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 34 . 3/21
So this fic is too angsty for some? Most relationships have a rocky part, geez. And Edward really hit her at her most vulnerable spot. It takes time.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 31 . 3/21
Uh oh. Did he see them when Jake kissed her? Will alice set him straight?
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 30 . 3/21
Ahhh, not angsty enough, lol. He wants her to say she doesn't want to see Jake and she wants him to forbid her.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 29 . 3/21
Ahh, I want them to fight then have make up sex.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 28 . 3/21
Poor Edward.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 27 . 3/21
Hmmm, Edward won't care much that she didn't tell Jake about him. One can forgive but still kuck him in the nuts.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 26 . 3/21
Damn, that's hot.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 22 . 3/21
That went well. Glad Charlie is aware Jake hurt Bella.
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