Reviews for Not Troublesome at All |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yes he was starved but the logical action Harry should've made was to eat less. If they starved him it's possible that the stomach would get used to the amount of food eaten and shrink. That's how most people have their diet(they restrain and start eating less until the stomach shrinks). You don't just assume that they were starved if the patient "wolfed down" his food(most probably, the patient was just famished). And psychologically, if there's trace of abuse and long duration of starvation, the patient should've been wary and eats lesser amount since logically he would be afraid of the repercussions of eating too much food that was given by others. So please don't assume this way if you see someone eat this way. I mean you're basically describing how Ron eats, and was he starved? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this the start of the Nara clan gaining a Kekei Genkai? xD I loved this it was so sweet and adorable. I’m curious about Faux though. Was he sent by the headmaster? Or did he travel to check on harry of his own accord? |
![]() ![]() I am so so happy you came back to this story! Thank you for your hard work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() did you say family... Family is everything |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was concerned for a bit that Harry would go back but was very glad that nothing came from fawks' showing. Great story hun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was pretty great. But how is he both their kid? Is he a test tube baby? Before I read that note at the bottom I was thinking maybe Harry's sperm was used to impregnate a surrogate who is a female Nara in order for the child to be his but also a Nara by blood. And what was the point of Fawks showing up all those years later only to immediately leave? How does it even know what Harry looks like? Or did it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i sooo loved this story. harry had his happy fawkes did not try to kidnap him or the use the goblet to summon him... i'm just curious how shikadai came to be. good job in this story author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice with an ending, but what of all the loose ties? what was Fawkes doing? how about Harry's original world? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot believe you had finished this story and I had never noticed! No alert! I loved it! I’ve always felt por Harry was given an unlucky hand and adults expected too much of him, it’s nice to read a story in which someone else is the one taking the reigns. Also Shika is awesome and he deserves all titular roles there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well done... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story Love it |