Reviews for The World On A String
Cobalt blue Amoeba chapter 3 . 2/22/2019
This story is very heavy on dialogue, but that's okay! You have a real feel for writing dialogue and making it seem real and natural.
Cobalt blue Amoeba chapter 2 . 2/22/2019
A very good dramatic scene. You write Sam and Diane very well. I can really hear them in my mind saying these lines.
Cobalt blue Amoeba chapter 1 . 2/22/2019
A good start to this story. Carla has some funny lines here.
samanddianefan10 chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
wow way to capture an entire story arc in just a few chapters! I loved the way you delved into Diane's unwaivering belief that she and sam were meant to be together. I really enjoyed this spin on things. this is just plain awesome, for lack of a better word
audries chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Oh I love this. I know I've said it before but you really do write them both SO well. Especially Diane, you have her voice just NAILED.
JulietxJames chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
Well, I'm probably repeating myself.. , I am! Great,Perfect, MORE!
Chelsea Oz chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
Man, Rush, when you get that writing feeling, you are on fire! Great job!
Jessica Simpson-Bourget chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
I have to say early Season 5 Diane is my least favorite, but you gave her depth and POV here, and it is lovely to see! If only the original writers had given her as much that season. It's great to get all the Sam insight too. It makes a difference. Anyway, great work, once again! I'm looking forward to your next endeavor.