Reviews for Ceremony of Innocence
phyrephly chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
That was fun reading; a lovely end to an excellent story...sounds like Polly got the message about Kal not being a treat to her. LOLOL Bruce with Hal. I hope you do write another one... I'll be in on that. ;}.
liligator1 chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
Nice way to end the story!
Nightwing 509 chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
I like the way you described Clark and Diana's wedding. I hope you write a sequel.
LowDesert chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
Guest chapter 12 . 10/7/2013
Awesome update!
Supabec chapter 12 . 10/6/2013
awesome :)
phyrephly chapter 12 . 10/6/2013
Very convincing story-telling there, Jrrm, a good read; this one could have almost been a story on its own but, gotta say it, ... a loaf of snakes. lolololol... well, added to the charm of the whole thing. ;D
Orion Drake chapter 12 . 10/5/2013
awesome story man keep it up
nando2k50 chapter 12 . 10/5/2013
Great Chapter, the figth was very well done and Zeus comment priceless...
HELLACRE13 chapter 12 . 10/5/2013
Jeeze, can artemis just shush. Ungrateful amazon. Loved this chap. From the battle to Clark's not cowering to anyone. Hopefully Diana will be healed and we can get them together!
Nightwing 509 chapter 12 . 10/5/2013
I like the way you had Clark defeat Ares. And tell Hades off. Please update soon.
HELLACRE13 chapter 11 . 10/5/2013
Ah great they are going into battle...daddy Zeus isn't so terrible after all. Good advice by J'onn to Kara.
nando2k50 chapter 11 . 10/5/2013
Quite interesting the Olympus politics...

I do not understand why Hal is so afraid of Batman, is not like he is powerless...

Waiting on the figth between Ares and Superman...
phyrephly chapter 11 . 10/5/2013
...a really good read..big battle ahead...bring it on! (easy for me to say, I know, lolol) :D
Guest chapter 11 . 10/4/2013
Great update. I hope Supes can make the Amazons believe he is of no threat to them.

More soon please!
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