Reviews for Ceremony of Innocence
Just a Crazy-Man chapter 13 . 10/8/2013
Nicely done.
Casema chapter 13 . 10/8/2013
Aw, I loved the ending!
nando2k50 chapter 13 . 10/8/2013
LOL very minor vibrations...
Humbird chapter 13 . 10/8/2013
Awesome.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
This story started well, but honestly it has greatly declined, it feels rushed and forced.
booeygirl89 chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
Excellent story! I read all 13 chapters through in one sitting. It had a great mix of action, tension, humor, and romance. I love the pairing of Kara and Hal, I have never given them much thought before this story, but I might have to from now on. Great ending to the story, poor Hippolyta.
HELLACRE13 chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
Beautiful! Loved it. You got them in character and I loved how you infused humor and insight and I hope you do write again.
phyrephly chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
That was fun reading; a lovely end to an excellent story...sounds like Polly got the message about Kal not being a treat to her. LOLOL Bruce with Hal. I hope you do write another one... I'll be in on that. ;}.
liligator1 chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
Nice way to end the story!
Nightwing 509 chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
I like the way you described Clark and Diana's wedding. I hope you write a sequel.
LowDesert chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
LOL!
Guest chapter 12 . 10/7/2013
Awesome update!
Supabec chapter 12 . 10/6/2013
awesome :)
phyrephly chapter 12 . 10/6/2013
Very convincing story-telling there, Jrrm, a good read; this one could have almost been a story on its own but, gotta say it, ... a loaf of snakes. lolololol... well, added to the charm of the whole thing. ;D
Orion Drake chapter 12 . 10/5/2013
awesome story man keep it up
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