|Reviews for Ceremony of Innocence|
| Supabec chapter 11 . 10/4/2013
| mardybummed chapter 9 . 10/3/2013
This is so fantastic! I can't wait to see how this ends, but at the same time, I don't want it to end because the writing is spectacular and the plot is very intriguing! Keep it up, loved it!
| Vault Boy chapter 10 . 10/2/2013
I've really enjoyed what you've written so far, it's an interesting take on Superman growing distant from humanity and his relationship with the League. I also enjoy your inclusion of some of the more peripheral DC characters who tend to be ignored sometimes.
That said, I can't help but be a little bothered by Hal's actions. First he ropes Superman into fighting Doomsday in which he gets put into a coma, then while he's injured he starts flirting with his much younger and (at the time) vulnerable cousin. Yes, this is Hal Jordan but that's a pretty dick move even for him.
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 9 . 10/2/2013
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
Interesting...what is she going to have to do or give up to be able to be with Kal?
More soon please.
| HELLACRE13 chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
I just love how you write Kal and Diana when they together. Props to Bruce for trying to be the big brother while Clark isn't there. I hope Zeus can help them because it's killing me they can't be together!
| HELLACRE13 chapter 9 . 10/1/2013
Damn Hera. Well at least Hippolyta is showing some wisdom and understanding. lol at Epione.
Oh Hal. Your reputation. Well in a way I understand Bat's reaction. Kara is not a kid but she is Kal's little sister...so Hal has some reassuring to do.
| ShepardN7 chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
well it's about time that zeus had a father to daughter talk
| nando2k50 chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
Let's hope that Zeus help Diana...
| Supabec chapter 10 . 9/30/2013
| Casema chapter 10 . 9/30/2013
Lift Hera's punishment, Zeus!
| krazie4kaldiana chapter 10 . 9/30/2013
Oohh grea updates i love how bruce is protecting kara ... selina doing everything with Bruce... Kal recovering with Diana awesome look who finally showed up about time Zeus
| nando2k50 chapter 9 . 9/30/2013
What the hell is wrong with Batman... Live and let live...
BTW, GOOD THAT YOU ARE BACK...
| Nightwing 509 chapter 10 . 9/30/2013
I like the way you had Diana & Clark flirting with each other. Please update soon.
| Darksnider05 chapter 10 . 9/30/2013
Does Zeus look like Liam Neeson?