Reviews for Ceremony of Innocence
phyrephly chapter 12 . 10/6/2013
Very convincing story-telling there, Jrrm, a good read; this one could have almost been a story on its own but, gotta say it, ... a loaf of snakes. lolololol... well, added to the charm of the whole thing. ;D
Orion Drake chapter 12 . 10/5/2013
awesome story man keep it up
nando2k50 chapter 12 . 10/5/2013
Great Chapter, the figth was very well done and Zeus comment priceless...
HELLACRE13 chapter 12 . 10/5/2013
Jeeze, can artemis just shush. Ungrateful amazon. Loved this chap. From the battle to Clark's not cowering to anyone. Hopefully Diana will be healed and we can get them together!
Nightwing 509 chapter 12 . 10/5/2013
I like the way you had Clark defeat Ares. And tell Hades off. Please update soon.
HELLACRE13 chapter 11 . 10/5/2013
Ah great they are going into battle...daddy Zeus isn't so terrible after all. Good advice by J'onn to Kara.
nando2k50 chapter 11 . 10/5/2013
Quite interesting the Olympus politics...

I do not understand why Hal is so afraid of Batman, is not like he is powerless...

Waiting on the figth between Ares and Superman...
phyrephly chapter 11 . 10/5/2013
...a really good read..big battle ahead...bring it on! (easy for me to say, I know, lolol) :D
Guest chapter 11 . 10/4/2013
Great update. I hope Supes can make the Amazons believe he is of no threat to them.

More soon please!
Supabec chapter 11 . 10/4/2013
awesome :)
mardybummed chapter 9 . 10/3/2013
This is so fantastic! I can't wait to see how this ends, but at the same time, I don't want it to end because the writing is spectacular and the plot is very intriguing! Keep it up, loved it!
Vault Boy chapter 10 . 10/2/2013
I've really enjoyed what you've written so far, it's an interesting take on Superman growing distant from humanity and his relationship with the League. I also enjoy your inclusion of some of the more peripheral DC characters who tend to be ignored sometimes.

That said, I can't help but be a little bothered by Hal's actions. First he ropes Superman into fighting Doomsday in which he gets put into a coma, then while he's injured he starts flirting with his much younger and (at the time) vulnerable cousin. Yes, this is Hal Jordan but that's a pretty dick move even for him.
Just a Crazy-Man chapter 9 . 10/2/2013
Epic read.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
Interesting...what is she going to have to do or give up to be able to be with Kal?

More soon please.
HELLACRE13 chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
I just love how you write Kal and Diana when they together. Props to Bruce for trying to be the big brother while Clark isn't there. I hope Zeus can help them because it's killing me they can't be together!
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