|Reviews for A New Beginning|
| HelloDenmark chapter 10 . 5/22
It's all written in code...
| monsterstilettos chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Interesting premise! It's a little hard to follow in some places (lack of punctuation I think) but otherwise seems cool! Ooo, hey, more chapters...!
| Win Lockwood chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
I like this chapter, well wrote, well described )
I always look forward to the next chapter :P
Love your story )
And yes it's french "J'espère que vous apprécierez le chapitre" ) Thank you to speak in my own language :P
| Win Lockwood chapter 4 . 9/30/2013
Good ! (y)
Update soon please ! :p
| Minno chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
This is quite good, the plot is very promising, but some things you have to explain a bit clearer. For exemple; why are they in Lothlorien and who are noldor (as far as I know it's only Galadriel who is a noldor elf)? But otherwise it was very good.
| Win Lockwood chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
I like your story, I will read the next chapter ! ;)
Good luck !