Reviews for The Potter Attraction
Mh3n013 chapter 18 . 1/10
I say kill dumbledork early or just kill him nxt chapter.
Silent Evanescence chapter 8 . 12/23/2017
Too much cliche.
Silent Evanescence chapter 6 . 12/23/2017
I mean, I reckon this could be called a chapter with a lot of words but did anything important actually happen? I seem to be skimming a lot of this story because there isn't really any conflict in it. None from his peers, teachers, Dumbledore, family, etc. It's Christmas and I haven't seen a mention of any of the conflicts from the first book except for like three paragraphs for the troll. Chapter 6 and I'm still working on what the story is actually about... Also, what was up with that scene change? Troll fight is over, teachers show up, exams are over and everyone goes home for Christmas is a jarring transition. I'll stick with it. Hope it gets better.

I can already tell the "Romance" aspect of the story is crap though. But that is mainly due to the lack of conflict in the story. Romance is boring without conflict. In future reviews, I'll try not to comment on it as I cringe through the harem.
Guest chapter 82 . 12/18/2017
good thing in my story no one in the light will die and harry will not go through 7 years of hell all the death eaters will be thrown through the vail or be hunted down with lucius, fudge and the toad being the first to fall before harry 2nd year the rat and crouch jr going through the vail before 3rd year and tom meeting his end without getting a new body and then meeting his end in the past where the lily, james and many others will bring down tom and his girls in 3 chapters
thedarkwolf95 chapter 82 . 12/14/2017
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Blake2020 chapter 5 . 7/23/2017
wkw
Blake2020 chapter 4 . 7/23/2017
interesting
Blake2020 chapter 3 . 7/23/2017
nice
Blake2020 chapter 2 . 7/23/2017
good
Blake2020 chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
great start
Nodz chapter 82 . 7/9/2017
This is the most cringe-inducing story I have read in a long time. Harry is a wuss without a spine who let's the girls step all over him like a doormat. None of the "jewels" have any kind of personalities they all behave the same way.
Overall I think this is a pretty pathetic story, that I seriously regret having wasting my time reading it.
U-233 chapter 10 . 7/2/2017
Got this far already, will try to comment on a few things before I forget them:

A fanfic of a fanfic, huh? Despite all it's flaws, I liked Chunnin Exam Day. I feel like your... continuation of it is a bit of an AU though. They had hiraishin or whatever it's called while this version of the Kitsune Clan behaves like it doesn't I think, and they had with three major improvements to the kage bunshin that HP isn't exploiting properly (no-divided-chakra required the kitsune bloodline, unpoppable / "bubble clones" required excellent chakra control, but the final improvement able-to-recover-chakra-and-last-indefinitely-and-have-infinite-clones didn't require either). But that's just the techniques. The bigger issues were that they were planning to have lots of biological kids shortly after leaving the timeloop. And they had the Kyuubi as a family member. Neither of which seems to be the case here. And... they were nice people as far as ninjas go, but the elemental nations was a place full of slaughter and banditry and misery and... well, ordeals worse than what HP was going through when they adopted him were commonplace, and presumably they were sufficiently hardened so that they didn't consider fixing every instance of such an absolute priority or they'd never have left the elemental nations.
LuluViBritania chapter 3 . 6/19/2017
wow just wow i read thru Chunin exam days after first giving it up for its silly muscle memory doesnt follow u in the reset stupidity(because muscle Memory is just that a Memory and will not be lost with the reset) just so i could follow this story now to find out u make chakra totally differant to magic when chakra basically is Spiritual energy/Magic and Physical Energy/Ki combined so naruto and his wives should be completly able to ignore muggle repeling charms and perform magic which is what i was looking forward to this story for. you should put in summery that this is not the case
Supergamer607 chapter 17 . 6/8/2017
really good so far just finished reading what happened to Meaghan and I'd just like to say that without giving the boys name you made it sound like Harry did it. the way she said"no never Harry" made it sound sarcastic like he did it to her. great story tho :D
Squarekiddo chapter 13 . 5/5/2017
Honestly, this fic would be alot more interesting without that silly harem thats done so horrible its not even worth reading the "build ups" anymore.

Props on explaining that Cho is not like canon here though, so that was my bad.
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