Reviews for An Accidental Heartbreak
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
TOTALLY what I thought Rachel would feel.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
This is really sad but completely amazing. You captured Rachel's feelings so perfectly it is almost scary
Korrela chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Awww
Winter Coma chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Wow...never figured Calypso would have a side like this. I now look at her in a new light, and it ain't pretty.

Still, great chapter.
LovesLoveAndAngst chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
I liked it, but it didn't really go with the books.
It fit with Greek Mythology, but not the books.
Still good though, wish you had followed the books a little bit more though.
Anastasia Victoria Black chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
by the gods did you have to make me cry as i was reading this ? it was heartbreaking to feel what Calypso felt
Lemariz chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Well, according to the books, Calypso fell in love with every hero that washed up on her island, not only Percy. And she was portrayed as a very sweet girl, not a as vain and selfish immortal. Not to mention that Percy sort of fell for her too. Having said that, your writing is beautiful. I loved the Rachel chapter.
Insane PJO LOver 93 chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Nice story
pineappleunderdc chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Ooooooouuuuucccchhhhies...

poor Rachel, Reyna, and Calypso!
though Calypso's was so heart breaking ㅠ.ㅠ
oh Percy, why do you have to be so attractive? Even I am another one of your accidental heartbreaks ;A;
RascalJoy chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
YAY! UPDATE! :D
This was GREAT! You did a good job, as always :)
Keep up the GREAT work!
Hermoninee-Granger chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
Good story, with only a few factual slip ups which are impossible to avoid with a confusing roman-greek premise like pjo/hoo :p (reyna couldn't have recognised annabeth as a daughter of athena when they first met as she didn't know when they next met, and as she didn't know about greek demigods :p xxx update soon, can't wait for calypso :D
Guest chapter 2 . 9/26/2013
I LOVE THIS. You are an amazing author and you update so quickly I could hug you. I think this style is better than a light-hearted and comedic three-shot.
Myseybee chapter 2 . 9/26/2013
Again, oh my gods. I'm just sitting here in stunned awe. If you don't eventually get published, it'll be a crime! This is definitely one of the best and my top ten :D
Halfblood With A SIG And A Pen chapter 2 . 9/25/2013
I like. I like a lot.
scarletfireblaze chapter 2 . 9/25/2013
Your writing's incredible! Please, please continue this soon! I can't wait to read more :)
-scarletfireblaze
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