oh hell this was awesomeeeeee! wow just wow.

Great story, really enjoyed this! I like that the characters acknowledged that they were the bad guys in other people’s stories, they had their reasons but they did make some terrible choices. One thing I really didn’t understand is why Bella published the book without using a pen name? She used the name she was living under, so everyone knew it was her book. That really didn’t make any sense to me

Ok, I've seen this multiples times in fics and it always annoys me. If you'd ever worn a pencil skirt, you'd know there no way you could wrap your legs around a stick, even less another person. So it'd be impossible for her to feel him rubbing anywhere, cause pencil skirts don't go up even your mid tights, and specially not hips.

your story is great, it is not taboo at all

I really enjoyed this, unlike other fanfics it had depth and character development... and the sex scenes don't hurt ;)

Bella and Edward will get married quietly. Levi will grow with the love both his parents didn't have. Their lives will never be perfect but love will see them thru the hard moments. Thank you for sharing this story with your readers, including me.
Judy

Edward made his final trip to visit his birth mom. She ignored him, but sent a USB Drive home with him. Probably part of his childhood.
Judy

Bella was amazing. The interview will go a long way to quell the gossip. And Levi has a puppy!
Judy

well, did the bitch lawyer try to prepare Bella for the interview, or just express her personal opinions?
Judy

Edward's company went public, putting the kibosh on take-over plans. The boys are loving their sleepover. Lizzy is bonding a bit with Bella over high-school bullies. Finally, Bella and Edward have a little time to get kinky.
Judy

Jasper is a lot nicer than Alice. Rose is a bitch, but Emmett is just a big kid. Esme is somewhere in between. Tanya is a piece of work. Edward is about to deal with James, also.
Bella has three boys tonight, and uses this excuse to avoid Edward.
Judy

Levi took control. The others followed his lead. The family members are trying to accept Bella, except for Rose, who seems resentful and bitter.
Judy

Bella's mad, because Edward went off the deep end again. Thank goodness Tanya wasn't home. I'm glad Jasper, Emmett and Carlisle brought him home. Tanya, probably with James helping rigged the car, hoping to kill Edward.
Judy

They're settling in and adjusting to the time change. Carlisle and Esme should have called first, but it did make Bella see that she will eventually have to include them in Levi's life.
Judy

The papz found them, thanks to Toby's mother. Now they're escaping to Seattle.
Judy