Reviews for Back to the Start |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. I'm so glad to see you're finally back to writing this series, it's absolutly one of my favourites. Can't wait for more :) |
![]() ![]() I have stuck with the last few chapters, hoping I will somehow warm up to this story but alas, I cannot. While you have writing talent, your characters are rather unlikeable on the whole (particularly Isobelle) and as a result I am struggling to care what happens to them. I also find Draco's manner quite frustrating as he is making his son follow the path into a forced marriage - something he himself despised. I also feel you write Hermione as a weak character and I cannot imagine that she would not support her children more. I really hate being so negative, but I think your talents are greater than what you are showing us in this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad you're back! Great chapter. I've missed this screwed up family! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I seriously dislike the charcater development. Isobelle is like she came out of Astoria. I also don't oike how convinient Astoria's death was (not this fic), how quickly she got married to Simon and the sudden change of heart of his. Don't get me wrong, your writing is impressive fr somebody your age and i read all your stories, but character development is something you should work on, and I'm sure it will come to yuo with time. Keep up a good job. Honestly, if you wrote a novel, I'd buy it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this series like no other, it's so full of angst and strained relationships that never fail to keep me interested. I know it's been a long while since you last updated, but I'm happy to wait :) |
![]() ![]() I'm disappointed in this story. The first one was fresh and new. I thought it would be interesting it was, but all the arguments got so tiring. They are always arguing even now. That's not how discussions are made. There's just too much drama to be realistic. Isobelle is so fucking messed up I cannot stand her anymore. She's not suit to be a mother. A baby is raising another child. It's funny how she hated Astoria but ends up being like her. I feel like I wasted my time on this. It was way too dragged out without a definitive plot line. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say I am highly disappointed with this story so far and I won't continue it. I really liked the first story and I thought when isobelle decided it was time for her to change she would actually do it. But in the second story she became even more ridiculous and made absolutely no changes whatsoever if anything she got worse. Now this story, since she grew up with a mother like Astoria you would think she would refuse to be that way. I saw her being a mother like hermione versus someone like Astoria but I guess that's expecting too much of isobelle. She is crazy, immature, bipolar and completely off her rocker. Seeing as she was the main character in the first two stories one would think you would show some character growth not a whole bunch of the same whiny bratty rude isobelle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy sh*t. Excuse my language but Isobella needs a lesson in love badly. |
![]() ![]() Its gross yuckyy |
![]() ![]() WHY NO UPDATES! Pls pls pls update I love this story n if u abandon it I will NEVER forgive u;) so PLS pls pls pls update;);););):) |
![]() ![]() I don't understand how Draco can force his son into a loveless marriage when he married Hermione no problem for love. I can't also get over the fact that they can't seem to understand the fact that Scor and Rose are not related at all. I know it's weird but I've known step siblings who have ended up married, there is no blood relation, unlike Isobel and Teddy... |
![]() ![]() I'm so glad you updated! :D and great chapter I really enjoyed this especially the Rose and Scor moment at the end, I love their scenes. And I can't wait to see what happens next! Can't wait for your next update! |
![]() ![]() This fic is awesome! You really should do more Scorose POV! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() You have no idea how happy I am seeing that you've updated! Please don't make the wait so long ever again! Loved this chapter by the way I'm so nervous for scorpious and rose lol update soon |