It's good to see people bring up how cute Naruto was when he was a kid, Tsunade and Kakashi are awesome teasing the young Naruto.

What a mess with time travelling and undead people... I loved it! I was apprehensive at first because of the length of the story but now that I reached the end I'm sad it wasn't longer.
All those plans and strategies - especially Orochimaru, it was so fun to see him having planned so far in the future (and past... well, different dimensions' past, technically...), it was frustrating how his plans went without a hitch most of the time - though I guess there's little that can't go according to his plans when his plans include watching what interesting things others will do.
Oh but not only Orcohimaru, I really liked the characterizations of all of them. Extra points for the short time we got to see tiny little cute Kabuto, I feel so bad for him...
I can't wait for the sequel! Will we see the fates of not only Naruto but also fo Obito and Kabuto? I mean with the changes, I'm sure it would be very interesting to see that happens in all thre of the alternate dimensions. Well I read your summary of the sequel and it kinda sounds like it, so it would be great! Can they even... communicate or something? Well, I guess it's not really important at the moment as we'll see when the sequel is up. I'm really looking forward it and!

dang it... i'm sort of triggered that you ended the story with loose ends... but it was a great read while it lasted.

Dude... freaking awesome fanfic! You did this SO well! It really felt like the character's were going through all that. I am highly impressed at your ability to capture the essence of each character. Especially between the two naruto's. And even Sakura and Sai and, well... pretty much everyone. Though I'm not a huge fan of Obito, so I didn't really care about his part of the story or anything. And it's just so weird to me to think "different dimensions?" It always feels strange to me. Anyway... LOVED this story and I can't wait to read the sequel! :D

Uh... I know my message is gonna be buried in a sea of review seeing how awesome this fic is but...

What ever happen to the chibi Kabuto? It seems kind of sad that he's the only one who didn't have a proper ending. Or did he already return to his dimension?

Please clear this up for me.
My Name is XxAkatsukiFanxX in this site. Pm me the answer?

this is a very good fic, it has a good plot and is not boring at all despite its sure you upload the sequel soon. kudos to you dude

Loved it!

From chapter 17 onwards I felt a little lost with all the different times. You're writing is really cool though and it was a fun adventure to read.

This was interesting and had a good run up to the time tea elections bit. Not rushed.

So, first of all, the writing for this fic is GOOD. A solid step above the "average" fanfiction writer. Characters were consistent, grammar was good, and you actually FINISHED the story.

But on the other hand... this story is 230,000 words long. That's about 3 average length novels (average is 70,000-90,000 words for this genre.) And the sum total of the plot is that Naruto learns what's in store for the future and resolves to change it. And while there were a lot of steps to the process, I wouldn't say that there has (yet) been a lasting change to Naruto (other than future knowledge, obviously) or to either world as a result of this story's events.

So, for me, this was a trilogy's worth of prologue.

On the upside, I now have a good chunk of time invested in this world, and I am very eager to read the sequel.

I'm sorry if this is a weirdly ambiguous review. There are not many fanfiction writers as good as you at the actual prose. I'm just sort of feeling unsatisfied about whether enough was accomplished in the plot to have been worth reading 3 novels. And usually I either like a writer's work or I don't. But now I'm feeling conflicted and trying to leave an honest review without being insulting. Because I like your writing. And I liked the story while I was reading it. But now that I've finished it, I don't like it that much. But I'm still really looking forward to the sequel, because the "fixing things" is my favorite part of time travel stories.

This ... was ... AWSOME! I loved it! It got me hooked right from the begginig and keeped surprising me! You, my dear friend, have a great talent! And the importance you gave to the details and the acuracy of the Naruto facts makes me happy.

I just don't understand one thing, why didn't the Time-Spanning get completly undone for the first body in Ame? Did the genjutsu stop it?
And how is Mandara going to come completly back now that Nagato is sealed?

Anyway thanks for the great work, expecting to read more from you.

wtf is sakura doing? she's probably five times as fast as naruto. Just catch up to him and get him back. seriously? letting a kid run away in this situation?

Does he think Sakura's beautiful?

I was afraid you will you the whole war because that would be spoilers to me. because i haven't continue the manga. XD
But so far the one that showed, i already read them.

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I had complicated feeling when Naruto still hasn't complete go back to past and end up with young Obito. But it's surprising enjoyable! I enjoyed it!
Not many people can write story like that.
most either stop after he finally go home or when back to future again, they write the story too long and kinda boringly. But you didn't! Which is great!

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When young Naruto with the Akatsuki (well though only Itachi, Nagato, and Konan), he look like he has older brothers and sister who adore him dearly. It's rather Heartwarming for a moment. Awesome!

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I LOVE IT!

IT WAS TRULY AMAZING ADVENTURE TIME TRAVEL GEN FIC EVER!

ONE OF THE BEST OF THE BEST!

AWESOME!

' He felt a mild sense of guilt at sacrificing his newly adopted otouto in such a manner, but it was for a good cause. '

My heart feels good! Itachi thought about Naruto as his adopted brother! Thank you! even thought only in crossover... but thank you! X'D

imma gonna continue read again now.