Reviews for The Windmill Turns Both Ways |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really know how I found this FF but what I do know is that I spent the last week reading it non stop and I fell completely in love with it. I'm a sucker for Time-Travel FF and the story in this one is absolutely great, the plot was awesome, the characters were IC... there was no way I couldn't love it. And if you decide to do a sequel, you must know that now you have a reader who would patiently-no-so-patiently wait for every update. Good luck! |
![]() ![]() Wonderful writing! This story is amazingly realistic and complex, while staying true to the original spirit of the series. It felt like a plot line that could actually happen. I can't wait for the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I hope they don't accidently get the alternate Orochimaru's interested in alternate dimensions as well (Start the Ninja dimensional police?!). I think it might be better to do two separate stories (per dimension), unless you plan on tying them together again. And what about poor young Kabuto, and what happens with his dimension?! Anyways congratulations on finishing the story, happens less often with good stories than I would prefer! Look forward to any sequels if you decide to go that route. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. We'll written and a good story. I'm looking forward to the sequel, whether it's in months or years I've got you on my alerts so I can see when it's up. Didn't expect to enjoy it so much but I really hope you write a sequel as I'd love to see how Shippuden plays out for this Naruto. His training with Jiraiya should be massively different and I'm guessing he'll return to the village with sage mode mastered and who knows what else. That alone really should convince Jiraiya that he was really in the future after all. Will the future play out pretty much like canon for the end or will you be telling us if and how that changed too? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't yet reached the latest chapter of your brilliant story yet, but I have to ask, will we see Naruto returning to the past, and then his subsequent journey through events back then with his foreknowledge of the future? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fantastic fic. The characterisation was amazing and I really liked the way you wove the various plotlines of the story together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Complex and completely amazing, seriously I could not stop reading. The character interaction and their depth lent so much to this story and made it all the more interesting to read. My one complaint: I cannot believe you left the story there! There are so many questions left unanswered and so many paths that Naruto and Obito can take...also so much that can just go wrong. When you write the sequel it would be really interesting if you could have Naruto and young Obito meet again, I just think it would be really interesting if they some how managed to cross paths again when things are not going well for the two of them. They're the only two who know what the other is going through. (I'm not including Kabuto because he seemed very unwilling to act on his situation) All I can say is well done and I look forward to the sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn good job Blaze. Damn good job. It definitely feels undone - like a cliffhanger or Naruto pt. I, but I guess you affirmed that with your planned sequel. I can't wait to see what you have in mind. I have to say, it'd be cool to see if you had other characters travel to the future and back, how they all interact. Ie. Sakura, Sasuke... Basically Team 7 lol. I guess you'd focus on this Part I incarnation and the Kakashi Gaiden versions in that story? With maybe some input from the Future timeline? As for details... I'm not sure. Maybe have this version of Naru-chan become more influenced by his time in the future so he... matures faster? I don't know... I just really enjoyed your idea the execution of it, and how it all unfolded. Such fun! And it'll be cool and interesting to see how the interactions unfold between Naru-chan and cast with the knowledge of the Alt. Future. Like for example, Naruto doesn't just learn the Rasengan variants and Kurama stuff, but he innovates them (like always does) into something different than we saw in the canon story. Can't wait to see the next chapter (sequel) of this massive story be told! Good luck and peace out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was a great ride, one that I truly enjoyed. Thanks for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He's back home, again! And this time, things will change... or at least I hope so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, it seems I was wrong. My bad. Aaaand Obito is obviously confused. I mean, who wouldn't be? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, they're both in the "future". But a future closer to the past...? Time travel is weird, sometimes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll be honest, I didn't expect this. But it makes sense, given Orochimaru's actions as Naruto was going to be sent back. Also, Kabuto is strangely adorable in this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As Naruto is "away", life goes on. No Valley of the End this time, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He's back home! |