Loving this fic so far. The only weird thing is that the elemental regions seem very small in your story as people can run from the Sand to Lightning in a small amount of time.

Wow,...I gotta say this was such a fantastic read! Everything was perfect! The different meetings, interactions, and reactions the younger Naruto had with everyone and everything was just wonderful! And the attention to detail to from both the manga and anime was just incredibly done! I'm going to start on the sequel soon and I can't wait to see how younger Naruto is going to try to handle all of this.

I just realize... beside never getting an official Chounin or Jounin level, Naruto never did get to officially attend his inauguration as the Nanadaime because of Himawari's 'lock on' attack... guy missed out a lot...

Even though theyre back I still cant stop myself from thinking that something is wrong wrong wrong wrong... Something is missing its not finished not yet. Nononononi.
Yeah something like that and my chest feels like there’s something pressing on it..

Which means that you did a great job with your story because im feeling so ... I don’t know. Frustrated? Upset?wary? Ugh!

I have my doubts and knew it was true nothing is ever a coincidence and he was hella suspicious the moment he used yama kuns name it is utterly devilishly smart plan and I cant honestly get gow he does it..

It was a wonderful story and I enjoyed it a lot

This is the first time I've favorited a story before even getting a quarter of the way through it.

It just feels intensely REAL in a way that is rare, while the plot itself is rather fantastical.

Wow.

You write characters well enough where I realize that I need to rewatch Naruto in order to continue my own fics. There's a lot of subtleties involved that I simply didn't pay enough attention to. Of course, I paid attention enough for watching and possibly analysis, but not creation of original content.

Anyway, my point is that you write good.

this is amazing! i was going to say that there should be more, about what will happen in this other naruto's timeline, and obito's- then i found out there's a sequel :D gonna binge it now heheh

Thank you for making me laugh out loud for a minute, about Obito wondering if he and Rin eloped.

I was going to wait until tomorrow to read more, but I couldn't help myself. Hehe.

And I'm so GLAD that I didn't. Somehow I didn't expect a "past" chapter, and it made things more exciting, in a sense. So exciting that I had to make some coffee so that I could stay awake and read properly.

I'm glad I decided to check out the story again, after all these years. The long(er) chapters didn't appeal to me and I ended up forgetting about it, I think. But I found this again, and I'm excited! This was a very dynamic start.

Just a quick comment about this chapter: it was a bit frustrating that Sasuke discussion was avoided like that, but I understand it to a degree. Sakura's overprotectiveness definitely annoyed me, and I think I would've been annoyed even without meta-knowledge. Not to say it was out of character, but still.

Anyways. Can't wait to catch up! It's a shame I'm so tired right now, but I'll read the rest later, definitely.

Congratulations on finishing the story, and its rewrite. The main parts that I enjoyed were how this story felt really natural in displaying how a younger Naruto would interact with the people in his hypothetical future. There wasn't a single point where I thought that there was something strange or out of place while I read the story, so in terms of keeping everyone in-character, you nailed it.

I also liked how you included Obito in a way that felt natural, although I'm not sure how Orochimaru figured out Tobi's true identity other than the possibility of him making an educated guess and hitting the mark.

Thanks for putting in the effort to write this story and refine it to the best of your ability. I enjoyed reading it a lot.

Love love loveee iiiit

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