Reviews for The Windmill Turns Both Ways |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Finally, we see the older Naruto! ...and he's asleep. Great. No more ramen for him! Sai is more tough that he looks for (I blame his shirt for his puny appearance). That Tsukyomi would have broken anyone, and completely destroyed (or rendered insane) Naruto. He doesn't seems to get away unscathed, anyway. It's just me, or has his ROOT training starting to crack as he suffered through it? And now, onward with the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story pretty different it was mentioned by another really good author so I decided to check it out :) can't wait for the next update and I hope u have the two naruto's meet I think it would be interesting - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, if small Naruto don't come back to his time, there will be no Naruto to grow up into the large one. If if big Naruto is the same as small Naruto, he should have the knowledge of what happened when he was small. Or, if you go with the progression theory, his knowledge of the past is changing fluidly with the new memories small Naruto makes. Or small Naruto will remember nothing of it after he come back in the same moment he was taken... or he will come back few moments earlier and prevent himself being taken, thus undoing the whole thing... Or he is from different time line, and will erase this future, or will create his own, divergent future... I love TimeT fic for their all time speculations. Also, I wonder, if you plan to make a step further, and show us how Naruto reates the new future with the gathered knowleadge (if he go back)? Assuming he will not come back about the same time he go to future, but e.g. the time he spend in future equals the arrival difference, wouldn't past time Tsunade and co be looking for him? It also would have consequences. Cheers, I'm looking for next installation od this fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, a pretty intersting approach fpr time travel. Its good written, the characters seem fitting, i like it Gonna follow it. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are we going to get a glance back at young Naruto's time? |
![]() ![]() ![]() seems interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very good story and i hope you update soon, i wonder how past naruto will hold out on his own in the war |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are a good - great author even. I like the world building and how everyone is in character even if the premise is, atleast to me, somewhat weird. I hope that you will at some point write a "regular" time travel fic because I would love to read that as well. In any case, after reading through your story I am eagerly awaiting more. You definitely deserve more reviews/exposure than you are getting and I hope you will be rewarded in due time. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! And I'm totally fine with an Omake. ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... an original idea! I thought these were extinct! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting and different story. You've travelled the path opposite to what most authors to take and placed an essentially powerless Naruto to the future. The protagonist is merely the observer. Its a very nice read, giving an in depth look into Naruto's character. I wonder how the plot of this story will proceed. Will we ever see the protagonist in action? I can't think of a situation where he'd become relevant in a fight. This is a war were anything less than a Kage, and eventually the Kage become cannon fodder, after all. The only power that could make a change as far as Naruto is concerned is whatever the result would be of that Senju DNA in his system. After all, even Hasirama's DNA is OP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm totally cool with the "Samurai Jack" mentality. That show was awesome! XD As is this story. Seriously, everyone is amazingly in character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't want Naruto to be turned into a tree! D: I hope that outcome is not so! Though a tree henge would be a funny prank on the Akatsuki... I hope Younger and older Naruto run into each other shortly. Mass chaos will occur. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really unique concept! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, poor Naruto . . . |