Reviews for The Windmill Turns Both Ways
Twisted Pxl chapter 3 . 11/23/2013
I think this is a really great story, however it causes a paradox to form too. Since Past Naruto came to the future, the future Naruto shouldn't exist.

Here is another example I can give similar to this. Lets take Martin Luther King Jr. as a 10 year old and send him to the future. Since he never grows up to change the view on slavery, the future still has slavery.

This would be the same with Naruto, since he never went on the training trip or done anything the Future Naruto did, most of the stuff that is happening in the story shouldn't be happening. The only thing that could explain how there are two Naruto's is when the past Naruto went forward, a duplicate was created thus everything that happened still happened (not sure how that would work though).
xXLostStar chapter 4 . 11/23/2013
I've been looking for a story like this for a long time and I'm extremely happy to have found this. This is exactly what I needed. Not only does it have a great plotline and is well written, but you've managed to keep this within canon timelines and you're not falling for cliché moments (if you get what I mean). This is definitely going into my favorites. Can't wait to read more.
Sanz0girl chapter 4 . 11/22/2013
can't wait for the next chapter.
artfrogy chapter 4 . 11/22/2013
If he stays permanent in the future, it would be interasting
ims chapter 4 . 11/22/2013
Good chapter, although the Sasuke issue is straining suspension of disbelieve. I mean, Naruto would have asked more, and somebody would have slipped up by now.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/22/2013
Hm. I think they could do a much better job in securing Narutos idendity.

And Itachi in Konoha does not really make sense. Yes, Kabuto could have sent him to sniff out rumors, but at the moment he should not be doing Tobis job. And that aside, if Edo Tensei Itachi would have wanted to get young Naruto, Sakura and Sai, he should have...

Still interesting premise and ncie story.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/22/2013
haha. Poor Naruto. "Maybe I am just good at talking people into suicide" :D

Good showing up to now. The first chapters had a few scenes at the beginning that didin't really ring true in character for Naruto, but this seems cool.
Igornerd chapter 4 . 11/22/2013
If Naruto is stuck here, he and Konohamaru could grow up with a fierce "eternal rivarly" where they try to do better pranks then the other one and compete for the Hokage title.
Hoshi124 chapter 3 . 11/20/2013
Igor chapter 3 . 11/4/2013
Oooh, I loved this chapter!
Naruto meeting his (now older) classmates...and bickering with Kiba like everything's normal.
I really hope we will find out what happened to the older Naruto soon.
Emeraldpichu chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Excellent story, there are very few stories that actually take advantage of the time travel premise in any interesting fashion, I am very interested in see how things will play out form here. well then until the next chapter then
artfrogy chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
is this going to be a naruto/hanabi story?
Sicloup chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
Igor chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
So somebody is really after the younger Naruto, after all?
Can't wait for the next update!
The Scrap chapter 2 . 10/11/2013
Chapter 2 and you do not disappoint.
A tad dry for my taste but this is the intro arc so that is a given.
I await more of these goodies from you.
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