Reviews for Falling Iron
Nick Kane chapter 8 . 1/31
Awesome!
Will we have more?
Guest chapter 8 . 1/10
Really interesting!
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 8 . 1/2
Great chapter, can't wait for more.
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 1 . 1/2
Interesting start
silvereagle2121 chapter 8 . 12/10/2015
hey so this is a cool story and I am definitely enjoying reading it. Keep up the good work and update again soon.
bkasavan chapter 8 . 11/27/2015
Interesting story. I look forward to reading more, and to seeing the outcome of the case.
Also, Tony tony tony tony tony.
Luke Dragneel chapter 8 . 11/23/2015
I didn't expect to like this story, even as I was reading the first chapter. Its chapters are a little short but I have enjoyed how you have run things so far.
My only problem is that Tony and JARVIS seem a little weaker than I expected(I expected them to be weaker due to their lack of resources available, though since Tony had been running an international corporate conglomerate before hand I would have expected a scenario where he sells off patented civilian grade technology to certain companies or the PRT, which would have netted him a steady stream of income to support his original budget similarly to what Taylor does in Canon after she joins the Wards. That and studying Tinkertech to make his own version of it, since he is an engineer first and foremost alongside an inventor. Just like I think Memories of Iron is a bit too fast for Tony, except that Tony is further along before coming to Earth Bet and has an unshackled A.I. managing things for him/her).

I hope you continue to write more about this in the future as I have enjoyed seeing how you work Tony's character with Taylor being the support and voice of rationality that Pepper and War Machine used to be(though Taylor is more practical and can keep his genius ideas centered with a core of practicality neither would be able to bring. But that's Taylor for you, I am curious as to what Taylor could do if Tony started to teach her the ins and outs of being an inventor/engineer.
Nerfhearder69 chapter 8 . 11/17/2015
Love the mix and your Tony is spot on! I hope life and your muse cooperate for more updates.
Difdi chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
Oh my. Tony rates at least Tinker 8, despite not being a parahuman in any way. That'll turn some heads.
gaul1 chapter 8 . 10/8/2015
Great chapter, awaits the next chapter, keep up the good work, byes
fuunu2003 chapter 8 . 8/21/2015
sweet keep it up
luger 7 chapter 8 . 7/31/2015
Rockin fanfic, dude!
Sailor Pandabear chapter 8 . 7/30/2015
cool
Byakugan789 chapter 8 . 7/14/2015
Nice little battle. Pitty about Uber. He can make absolutely anything...once. Otherwise it blows the fuck up. How do you even work around that? Best I can figure is start out with machines and systems designed to reproduce stuff otherwise that powers got some pretty crippling limitations. It's like playing trick or treat with the Joker.

I don't suppose Tony's gonna conscript either of them? Leet's pretty useful if you can keep him focused and Uber, for all his limitations, could still be of benefit to someone like Iron Man or Dragon.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
I thought it was abandoned once I reached chapter 6 a few months ago...went back to see 2 chapter updates...will be following this story again, hope you update more in the future :D
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