Reviews for Falling Iron |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh so that is ONE of the reason's Contessa set of the nuke, she did it early and in a way they would know about it. Nice chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, you write fast. Cool. Contessa was foiling a Hyrdra plot... by making it look like a Hydra plot. Heh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. Puts the power difference between MCU-Asgard and MCU-Earth into perspective. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. 4,000/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. Wow, this goes in the record book, one of the few times PtV actually works in our favor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well thank the gods for Contessa then she may have just saved everyones ass, nice work |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome once more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was fast updating there, glad for the interlude and explanation on how they got to Earth Bet. I also like that you put in the actual reason for Contessa's visit(cause at first I thought it was simply so that she could blame the incident on Hydra, not that there was an actual Hydra plot in progress which makes it even better) aside from the blame game. No major mistakes that I can see here and the storyline flows from one scene to another very cleanly. I also like that you have Piper both working on finding/getting back Tony without getting overly obsessive about it, keeping Stark In. in business and out of government control, and is still visibly affected by Tony's potential death. It's a nice little balancing act between the three that you managed to pull off fantastically without it feeling to dramatized or coldly divorced from her emotions(that would be Emma Frost, not Piper Potts) enough to get things done. This also opens up a whole new avenue of possibilities thanks to Asgard's level of tech and the Marvel Heroes(as for some reason the humans of Marvel and DC tend to be a lot tougher and generally more badass than their Worm counterparts. Must be something in the water, or the cauldrons). |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my favorite story by far of all the Worm crossovers I've read. Looking forward to the resolution of the cliff hanger, and Jarvis meets Jarvis :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) I like this. I like it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. That was pretty out of left field. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, I can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there. Thanks for having started this story. While I don't really like Worm, it sure has spawned some awesome fics and crossovers. This among them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, i didn't see that happening. Great twist and Thor thrashes the little girl with wings. |