Reviews for Falling Iron |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. Nice set up there for the Endbringer battle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww, cliffhanger. Can't wait for more! I really want to see what Tony can do to the Simurgh! Zellos seems to tell the future or break the 4th wall I'm guessing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, good to see more of this story. On side note, your times for Tony's trip seemed a little off, but I didn't account for the time zone change at first. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Coolio, wish we got updates sooner tho. I'm guessing school schedule was being a bitch right? Keep up the good work man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good crossover, and Iron man is a good choice from Avengers to go into Wormverse consider his flamboyant personality and his ability being his brain so his power is essentially only limited by how much resource he has. The interaction between Tony and Taylor is pretty entertaining and sweet at times, and aside from Tony can act as a jackass from time to time they definitely feel like they would have great chemistry if they meet (consider both of them are kind of brainy type). With this new chapter I wonder if this will go down 'Avenger: United we stand' route where the heroes start wearing armor to enhance their abilities produced by Tony, which I think is actually a pretty awesome idea (yeah, the show is pretty terrible, but I think United We Stand's idea is interesting where a team mostly of B to even C-List heroes try to do good under the command of the most insecure founding member of Avenger). Some part of the story feels like they breeze by a bit too quickly without a chance for me to catch a breather but it's not a deal breaker, and I'm definitely hooked on seeing what you'll do with the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your alive, welcome back and fun chapter to start with, maybe the death of the wing-Ed one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good old Tony up to his usual shenanigans. Nice to see J.A.R.V.I.S. is alive and kicking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great read! I'd read more, given the opportunity. Thank you for sharing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cooooool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting idea, but needs a little inserted earlier on to have Tony realise he's in another dimension/reality. He somehow knew about Earth Aleph and Bet and what they meant, which doesn't really make sense. I suggest having him ask about Stark Industries or something, then getting a sinking feeling at their ignorance of it and him, then a scene break just after he asks a few more pointed questions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story so far. But man, Armsmaster sucks at any kind of social interaction. I've never ever seen an Armsmaster who's actually charismatic and good with other people. Maybe there should be a one shot or Omake some day with an Armsmaster who's actually socially competent for once... Anywho. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Will we have more? |