Reviews for Falling Iron
DamionKenley117 chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
Not sure if you noticed, but you were recently added to a group for crossovers I subscribe to. Since then, I've found myself reading through Worm in my spare time (all of it.) and I love it. Thank you for this story and for inadvertently showing me the original material.
Rydan fall chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
Think Bubbelgum Crisis style hardsuits.
Tony placed his flight thrusters in his boots & gloves for a reason.
Control is something I'm wondering about, though.
I mean, how does Tony control his suit?
It can't be with his hands, nor with a brain-machine interface.
Do hope Tylor gets paired with Dragon, somehow.

Ever watched Eureka-7?
Kit-Win & Armsmaster should see if they could build such verhincels, done right and it could probably pull somekinda trailer as well.
Car/truck mode, robot mode & plane/fighter mode, if that doesn't give mobility...

Heck, how would everybody react if Tony started building a Shield HeliCarrier?
Do wonder what the Endbringers would think about the Hulk.
skywiseskychan chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
Oh my, now what's going to happen. Certainly Jarvis in posession of the Iron man suit, with posession of the Arc Reactor, its a nightmare for the dragon slayers. Adding that Tony is unconciuos and Dragon's on the clock... its going to get interesting. Especially as I'm not sure anyone else knows Dragon's an AI at this point.

What would be funny would be Taylor going upt to saint and telling him that she's just disabled 204 of Jarvis' directives. The shock and horror on his face of unleashing an AI. Wonderful.
Jouaint chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
Another great chapter.
Marcus Galen Sands chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
The plot twists continue to mount and this story grows more intersting. I look forwards to seeing Tony begin to rebuild his fortune and for Taylor to start her cape career with a bit more back up.
alex.rushing.5 chapter 4 . 9/30/2013
Iron man amor for all with the arc reactor.
Rydan fall chapter 3 . 9/27/2013
Well, atleast Taylor her armor will be designed well, even if it's the same one as in the book.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/27/2013
good work
"Two hundred and and four imperatives are currently suppressed
LOL
luger 7 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
A most excellent chapter. Rock on, dude.
skywiseskychan chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
Wonderful! I like what you did with this chapter, as short as it was. I also now feel like I need to go back and check how many TOTAL restrictions you said Jarvis was under, to see how may of them the 204 cover. It's looking terribly fun, and Tony really does need a minder, I have to wonder if it was Potts who put in the rules to let his current assistant modify Jarvis' rules.

Good fun.
reality deviant chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
good chapter.
Taylor saes tony yet again-and probably continue to do so.
kid win and armsmaster surprised by tony giving taylor enhanced privilages, just wait til they learn she triggered, and her power.
seeing what she can do with them, as wel as any ideas tony wil suggest later will likely bring interesting reaction...
Jouaint chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
Another excellent chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Viktorius chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
Fantastic! Following you on Spacebattles!
alex.rushing.5 chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
Oh this isnt going to end well for taylor.
SuperiorShortness chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
This is amazing... I hope there's more. Its my favorite Worm story yet.
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