Reviews for Falling Iron
SeanHicks4 chapter 14 . 11/7/2018
Interesting cross, only big issue I had was Saint seemed to be the only correct name of the Dragonslayers
Guest chapter 14 . 10/21/2018
I liked the chapter!
Debate4life chapter 14 . 9/27/2018
You’ve left it at that cliffhanger for 9 months? You monster.
fristknight chapter 14 . 6/17/2018
hope this will continue
UseFistNotMouth chapter 14 . 5/20/2018
Things got really rushed once you added the Avengers and Shield to the Simurgh fight. And then that cliffhanger. I think sending the whole helicarrier and the Avengers was a mistake. Detracted from all the character building and plot tweaking that made the early story great. I think the main mistake was that you let too much time pass during the story which backed you into a corner. A rewrite where the focus is on the characters' daily lives and more has the chance to happen, interaction and setup-wise to make bigger events later matter more.
Difdi chapter 2 . 5/17/2018
You have a recurring typo - there is no such thing as a Mac Truck, but there is a company called Mack Trucks.
Wolf Guard Miestwin chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
Pretty enjoyable.
Will continue reading to see where it goes.
Archmage Ansrit chapter 14 . 4/22/2018
Great chapter! Things are getting a lot more complicated than they seemed at the beginning of the story...

Also, I wonder why do they keep shouting that, naming themselves after a mythological monster whose tale's whole point was that it was killed anyway. It was supposed to be impossible, yet it happened anyway because the hero exploited another weakness instead of playing to its strength.
Guest chapter 14 . 4/20/2018
*He just stared at her for a long second with his mouth open. "And that is pants-wetting terrifying," Tony said. "See? Adorifying! Adorable and terrifying!"*

I lost my shit at this part for like 2 minutes straight. Still giggle (in a manly way!) even looking back at it. That was just perfect.

Really, really looking foreward to more!
Guest chapter 10 . 4/20/2018
Dude! That ending bit with Contessa shooting the (presumably) Hydra mole was fucking awesome. Best bit of this fic so far, imo. Really loving this fic waaaay more than I expected when I started. I really hope you'll keep it going! :)
thisistotallyaname chapter 14 . 4/8/2018
Oh shit.
thisistotallyaname chapter 5 . 4/8/2018
This is great.
thisistotallyaname chapter 2 . 4/8/2018
Me likey!
Navn Ukjent chapter 14 . 4/6/2018
Fun story so far.

I do hope that you will post an update soon, and not leave us with that cliff-hanger.
creativesm75 chapter 14 . 4/3/2018
oh wow. very good
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