Reviews for Falling Iron |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting cross, only big issue I had was Saint seemed to be the only correct name of the Dragonslayers |
![]() ![]() I liked the chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You’ve left it at that cliffhanger for 9 months? You monster. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope this will continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Things got really rushed once you added the Avengers and Shield to the Simurgh fight. And then that cliffhanger. I think sending the whole helicarrier and the Avengers was a mistake. Detracted from all the character building and plot tweaking that made the early story great. I think the main mistake was that you let too much time pass during the story which backed you into a corner. A rewrite where the focus is on the characters' daily lives and more has the chance to happen, interaction and setup-wise to make bigger events later matter more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have a recurring typo - there is no such thing as a Mac Truck, but there is a company called Mack Trucks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty enjoyable. Will continue reading to see where it goes. |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! Things are getting a lot more complicated than they seemed at the beginning of the story... Also, I wonder why do they keep shouting that, naming themselves after a mythological monster whose tale's whole point was that it was killed anyway. It was supposed to be impossible, yet it happened anyway because the hero exploited another weakness instead of playing to its strength. |
![]() ![]() *He just stared at her for a long second with his mouth open. "And that is pants-wetting terrifying," Tony said. "See? Adorifying! Adorable and terrifying!"* I lost my shit at this part for like 2 minutes straight. Still giggle (in a manly way!) even looking back at it. That was just perfect. Really, really looking foreward to more! |
![]() ![]() Dude! That ending bit with Contessa shooting the (presumably) Hydra mole was fucking awesome. Best bit of this fic so far, imo. Really loving this fic waaaay more than I expected when I started. I really hope you'll keep it going! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me likey! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun story so far. I do hope that you will post an update soon, and not leave us with that cliff-hanger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow. very good |