Reviews for Leon and the Servant
Guest chapter 10 . 11/10
I know the fire that Merlin started was one scene with magic, possibly the bandit attack, and when Merlin was looking for the sword in the river... Maybe when he was bringing up water for Arthur's bath?
BooksAreMedicine chapter 14 . 10/31
Glad they took care of all the roots of the problem
BooksAreMedicine chapter 13 . 10/30
The line about magic was a nice touch
Glad Arthur has realized the truth about what it is to be noble

It's wonderful to see Merlin on the mend
BooksAreMedicine chapter 12 . 10/30
Uther is a bit OC here but I am glad to see progress being made to help Merlin
BooksAreMedicine chapter 11 . 10/30
Leon is a smart one, to not blame the Steward further but to give him an out. Merlin really should just answer to Arthur and Gaius, like on the show, but glad you have fixed that here
BooksAreMedicine chapter 10 . 10/30
Glad he is getting taken care of
BooksAreMedicine chapter 9 . 10/30
Wow, this was amazing! So glad the truth, the horrible truth came out
BooksAreMedicine chapter 8 . 10/30
Aww, Sir Leon is amazing, helping him, feeding him and opening Arthur's eyes
BooksAreMedicine chapter 7 . 10/30
Seriously, this is so much worse than the show where it does seem that he has some free time
BooksAreMedicine chapter 6 . 10/30
Poor Merlin, does everyone hate him?
BooksAreMedicine chapter 5 . 10/30
Go Leon! I am glad he DID something :)

That lord has a point, Merlin was being treated like a slave
BooksAreMedicine chapter 4 . 10/30
I like how Leon realizes his own views have changed but others' haven't. He scoffs at Prince Arthur's apology but did he do anything about it?
BooksAreMedicine chapter 3 . 10/30
Poor Merlin, his acts of kindness resulting in pain and the loss of clothes he can't afford to replace.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 2 . 10/30
I like how Leon notices all these details and how practical he is...Arthur could benefit from that
BooksAreMedicine chapter 1 . 10/30
I am glad Leon took it upon himself to punish the squires though I wish he had defended Merlin but it's early yet.

I like how the first thing he notices is the hard work and the bravery of Merlin...and his thought on the honor was telling too
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