|Reviews for The Adventures Of Harry Potter, the Video Game: Exploited|
| ZhaWarudo chapter 13 . 10/9
Loved the Spark of Genius but can't say the same for this one. I've only read 3 chapters but it was enough to see it suffers from the same flaw almost all gamer fics do.
MC farts and gets a skill and skill points, there is no challenge.
I understand it's fun to you, just wanted to give you this bit of constructive criticism.
| Darkneostar1 chapter 13 . 9/26
Loving this story. Wish you could update more often.
| Kitsanken chapter 13 . 9/21
I love the concept of “My Life’s a Video Game” and I very much adore your version. I’m a newcomer to your story and I’m grateful for the 13 available chapters...but I can’t wait for the opportunity to read more when future chapters become available, so I’m definitely putting this on my “Follow” list. Thanks for sharing! _
| PortgazDAdz chapter 13 . 9/19
Been another year mate...
Please update soon!
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/11
Please make the next one soon!
| hunzbookwyrm chapter 12 . 9/8
Great story hope to see more soon.
| infinite eternity chapter 7 . 9/6
I've really been enjoying this story! It's interesting, funny, and creative. I hope you keep writing :D
| ADAZ99 chapter 13 . 8/28
thats a nice story, funny story
| Mandalore Requiem chapter 5 . 8/15
Well now the cover image makes sense now.
| so perfect it hurts chapter 13 . 8/9
Hey! I love this story so damn much!
One thing I am a bit confused about is Harry's actual age? Last I read he was 4? Is he still 4? Cause I can totally get behind a 4 year old doing all this crazy stuff with a murdering kitten that does his bidding and a beautiful snowy owl that sits on his head. Very clever making her able to get Harry's rent.
I was thinking because Harry was so good at herbology he could really bond with little Neville 3
OH I just remembered your Luna. Yes. Just - Yes. I hope he has a lot more to do with her.
I was thinking he hasn't even visited the book store yet. So much knowledge - so little time. Plus potions doesn't need a wand, so Its something he could fully get to level 100 before even starting hogwarts and RUB IT IN SNAPES FACE YEA.
Also - Harry doesn't have a place to stay yet. Keen to see where you end up putting him. Not that he needs to sleep.
Okay - looking forward to seeing Knockturn alley also
So much potential! Can't wait to read some more.
| AloofEyeball chapter 13 . 7/30
I always enjoy re-reading bits of this story. Since Harry is in the Diagon area, perhaps he might decide it's a good time to check out Knockturn, with its abundance of possible shady creature/shopkeeper encounters and attendant unpleasant surprises to overcome. At the very least he can run through at maximum speed to see a bit of what's there and pick up the exploration exp.
| Willowred5 chapter 13 . 7/26
Dang it all. It was a great point for a new chapter, but no new chapter yet. PLEASE UPDATE
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/24
Really, really stupid. Funny, but stupid.
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24
oh jesus, not old man handerson. run bitch run.
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/21
Too bad he didn't remember he could run back within 10 yards of a still whimpering Lockhart point at him and say Cat's Paw so he goes to jail for all the death and destruction as a publicity stunt gone wrong.