|Reviews for The Adventures Of Harry Potter, the Video Game: Exploited|
| Talonwalker chapter 13 . 20h
Great story so far, looking forward to the rest. Hope to see more soon
| Tamerlorde85 chapter 13 . 12/11
Phenomenal story! It’s been a couple months since you updated, but I am certainly eager to read the rest. And a suggestion, perhaps another timelapse to closer to Hogwarts? I certainly enjoy reading the story now, but I feel as if the pace is a little slow.
| lilikaco chapter 3 . 12/9
I'm pretty sure the game programmer is Harry lol
He is so unhinged!
| the real narnia chapter 13 . 12/9
Wow. Just...wow. This was amazing, and I absolutely loved it. I'm glad that this masterpiece isn't abandoned, because I'm still looking forward to more of the story!
The inclusion of Luna makes me INCREDIBLY happy, because I love her sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.
I can't wait for us to reach the canon adventures, but I absolutely love how Harry is cheating so much. It's hilarious. While it's not something I would have the patience for in a game, I would definitely do the same in real life. I love the trophies and the sarcasm of the game creators, and I love Harry's pure amount of spite. The Hufflepuff shovel thing is fucking hilarious, and the constant killing plundering is amazing. I love how he's basically robbing everyone blind.
Speaking of which, even if he doesn't have that HORRIBLE reputation with the goblins anymore because he reloaded, I'd still love to see him kill a bunch of death eaters and bring the goblins their ears. That'll make them like him. Maybe even get him a way into his vault. :D
I absolutely love this story, and I'm looking forward to more. I hope you update soon, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Happy writing! :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/8
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/8
holy shit amazing
so excited to read this
| The romantic insanity chapter 13 . 12/6
Hedwig OP please nerf
Great chapter as always
| Darksnider05 chapter 2 . 12/6
Shouldn't Harry's body be effected by the stat changes?
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4
Completely masterful story, one of the best "gamer" fics around other than that monstrous 750k word Percy Jackson one. Please update more frequently though, I realize infrequent updates are the bane of every fanfiction writer but please.
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/29
Why doesn't Harry try to pickpocket a wand off someone? Even if it didn't work, I would still expect him to try it. Also, pretty sure dual wielding should be at 26 as of the last chapter.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/29
Shouldn't Harry's unarmed skill be at level 9 do to the skill book from last chapter? And why didn't Harry loot all the zookeeper corpses? Lastly, I would have liked to actually read the boss battle rather than a short summary.
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/29
I'm surprised that there weren't any golden snitches at the school.
| Moon-Beam95 chapter 13 . 11/28
Highly skeptical of the premise but next thing I know I've read the full thing and giggled all though out. I love the unspeakable aspect and that the first thing Harry and Headwig do is to be the place blind. Can't wait for the next chapter. Xxx
| Stormwing89 chapter 9 . 11/27
Am I the only person who REALLY wants to know the rest of that Quidditch song? And who might have tried looking it up to see if I could find it?
| Stormwing89 chapter 5 . 11/27
Don't forget shrinking a horrible looking sweater, that was canon too. As for story options, besides the underworld/black market stuff, you could add famous sites like Big Ben, the London Eye, or the Tower of London- that in particular has a nicely creepy back story and interesting contents that I'm sure can inspire a rather interesting chapter. Then there are museums, restaurants- he does have a Master Chef title, maybe have that trigger a quest where a restaurant owner/manager needs help- heck, that could tie into him getting criminal connections and quests if you have a Criminal Boss of some type (Mafia?) own, be related to the owner/manager, or have important reservations at the restaurant. Don't forget the London Library, that could be useful, especially if you have that be a way to meet Hermione early or if, like some stories do, you make the library have a hidden magical section/ counterpart.