Oh crap, DA is making a move! Run Lark, RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!

Love the speech, liking the dialogue and the interactions, but most of all the reminiscing of Cyclonis.
I love it, I love it!

Nice new start. I like how Lark is willing to negotiate peace for once, unlike every other time where it was forced on her or a trap.

This is already heading off in a grand direction
You did really good with the reboot

best of luck

So will there be any changes to this from last time?

Also, thanks for keeping the Storm Hawks fanfiction archive alive.

For one, the pacing is too short, IMO. Secondly, you need a proofreader. This is just my opinion on the first chapter. Who knows, you might of fixed these. But I just needed to say in case you did not. I mean you spelled "rough" as "ruff".

Otherwise, I like the concept.

I like how you write the battle scenes! Hope you update soon!

Just read the first chapter. Love the concept and the chapter is written pretty well. Looking forward to the rest!

I totally am looking forward to the next chapter, and I am sure that it'll be worth the wait.
I have to say, I hope that Piper likes Lark back, they make a cute lesbian couple.
Happy writings!

I just noticed. What happened to Snipe?

Oh my god, please write more. I'm absolutely loving this story so far and I definitely can't wait to see what may eventually transpire between Piper and Cyclonis ;)

- 7th

More.

Love this story so far

Though you need to get some more drama in. Like have Dark Ace's POV or a land combat between two people.

Overall, love it

Great story so far, :D

The plot interesting and well written,
your writing is also easy to read and your grammar is great. :)

I would love to see what happens next!
Please continue, I like it. c: