Reviews for Journey's End
Eddie chapter 1 . 1/10
Loved it! It was really good, i wish i could do it...
BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
Utterly beautiful work, Real Dark inferno! The smuttiness was just the right amount to balance between too subtle and too graphic, with enough emotional exposition from Harry to make this more than just PWP.
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
awesome story
love it
Visitante chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
Dude you write you extremely well you have to update anyway lol I love fanfic please bring updated
amonyna chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
Hello, I loved the story could not have looked better though you could have escriro more chapters like: Harry and Hermione are married and have kids etc…
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
I hope you will consider some of my ideas for gohan x 18 story.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Please make a Gohan x android 18. When gohan becomes 13, krillen and 18 broke up gently. Gohan befriended 18. During a full moon and puberity. Gohan becomes extremely aggressive and horny. 18 walked in on him while he was training to blow of steam. Unfortunately human saiyan puberity plus full moon plus super saiyan 2 plus 18 being hot equals gohan pinning her down and losing his virginity that night and a extremely sore, pissed, and happy 18. They become friends with benifits at first but it grows. Chi chi dies giving birth to goten in this story. Gohan inpregnates 18 when he turns 16
DarkHarmonian chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
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Cateagle chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
A fun story with potential for sequels or furthr chapters. There are some typos that need fixing ("Wesley" instead of "Weasley" for one) but 'tis quite enjoyable none the less.
MissSmoak chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
I liked the story, but I feel like the end is missing.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
weak
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Awesome one-shot!
anotherboarduser chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
I think this story is very good.

It's is realistic, emotional and just so well written.

You can almost feel for Harry and Hermione in it. Everything, the details, the characters, their thoughts and the plot, just comes together to form a really good story.

I look forward to reading more stories like this from you.
narutofanfiction chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
The main thing that you got wrong was that we don't use Miles, we use Kilometers, for the airport it is anywhere from 15 to 20Kph, the average road is 60Kph, and the highway and motorway, are 100 to 120Kph, some of the main roads, 2 or 3 lanes can also be 70, 80 or 90 too it just depends on the area.

very good story otherwise, but i would love another chapter as it would be great, hell i was expecting a 5 year old daughter or son cliche in there too so it was very good and only the second like that but very different from the first, (Luna went with him and they met the Dr's Grangers, and removed the memory blocks) hope you keep writing and please keep up the great work
starboy454 chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
excellent up date
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