Reviews for Doomed to Die: The Ninth Hunger Games
SuiGaa chapter 40 . 7/12
I really wanted Sher to win from the beginning but I guess another intellectual is just fine. Off to read the 10th.
President Snowflake chapter 2 . 10/15/2014
Only two chapters in and I can already tell I'm going to love this. Your writing is absolutely beautiful to read, and I love the fact that you did a chapter with all of the previous victors' POVs in it! So interesting to get into their heads, especially considering they're the first few victors in Hunger Games history. I hope they show up more in the story, I really want to get to know more about them!
kopycat101 chapter 40 . 8/18/2014
HARAKUISE, YOU POOR DORK
YOU'RE WORRIED ABOUT PEOPLE /LIKING/ YOU, OHMYGOD THAT'S HILARIOUS AND ALSO SAD
I like Tania and Harakuise's relationship. No matter what, she's there for him, but will he frank and even admits that she'll never fully like him. Fucking incredible

I can just imagine a slightly smiling and waving Harakuise, who's a bit subdued
But...POOR JAI. OH MY GOD
JAIIIIII
And despite not knowing how to comfort people well...Harakuise does his best. What a f ucking DORK
He's going to adopt Jai now, but mask it as just giving him a ' job'
This is so sad but sweet and very EMOTIONAL, SOMEONE HOLD ME

This has been a great ride and VERY EMOTIONAL. LIKE WTF ARE WITH ALL THESE COOL KIDS THAT KEEP DYING, MAN
Gonna read the sequel *runs off*
kopycat101 chapter 39 . 8/18/2014
I'm actually applauding at Harakuise's character development, how Tania finally accepts that she can share the burden of mentoring with him, and how MY PREDICTION OF HIM TAKING THE DOLL WAS RIGHT
AW
AWWWWWWW
Especially all that GENUINE SMILING HE'S DOING
WTF HARAKUISE YOU'RE MAKING ME EMOTIONAL

HARAKUISE SALUTING PIKE'S DEATH, MORE LIKE SOMEONE HUG ME IM TOO EMOTIONAL
Well, I suppose that's mostly a wrap...If Harakuise didn't start off relishing/drenched in blood and torturing animals, then perhaps I would have understood his Point of view: of doing what he did like a true soldier for the people he wanted to protect, with honor, dignity, and loyalty
Man, a lot of events could, in fact, have played differently. This was a great extra chapter
kopycat101 chapter 38 . 8/18/2014
All the Victors waiting for the other shoe to drop, waiting to see who'll be Victor... Gah, the suspense, the heartache!

Harakuise, the action of standing at attention to the Capitol anthem is going to get you killed damn it
And BRIE TAKES THE CHANCE to GET HARAKUISE DOWN
But...She hesitates. Because Harakuise is scared, and he really does want to talk. She actually takes PITY on him, and allows him to talk, grudgingly, because of the favor she owes him.
...Woah...Harakuise is right. He's a radical mobster- probably could kill her brother through his men and his connections, if she killed him. Nice save, man, nice save
Hopefully they can take on Ella, and then see what epic showdown there is in store

I think that Harakuise really admires Brie for her actions; but then he also uses her courage to his advantage.
Harakuise sure is a smooth talker. Why didn't he show his...softer, less creepy side, before? I may have warmed up to him sooner.
And then WOW HARAKUISE, DID YOU PICK UP YOUR BOI SHER'S REASONING, TO KNOW THAT THE EAGLES WOULD PICK YOU UP AND TAKE YOU TO THE FINAL SHOWDOWN W Ow
Also that little wink wtf Hara stop being CHARMING
Anyways...Okay this is fucked up for me to say, but Brie and Harakuise's interactions here make my ship them. They're so...dysfunctional, yet it's what makes them work.
I mean, just imagine them in a non-deathmatch AU where they cross paths constantly, and Brie's creeped by him. But slowly, he comes to say nicer things to her, becomes more charming, goes out of his way to be better because of her. And their bond grows where they trust one another more and more, and Brie even leaves Jai in his care when some freak accident happens to her and she's on her deathbed.
Fuck IM SORRY IM SO WEIRD AND CREEP But if it makes anyone feel better, I can also imagine an AU where Brie and Sterling raise Bailey and Jai together

Ella is still looney. Like, super looney. Lone-person-stranded-on-a-deserted-island loony.
But they came, and in STYLE B)
And Brie gets the first hits in! Whoo!

Oh shit oh fuck
HARA, HO LY
nO BRIE DONT DO IT WTF
OH MY GOD, SHE GOT SAVED BY A LEDGE, AND ELLA PLUMMETED TO HER DEATH
TH AT
BRIE WT F WTF
THAT END WAS SO SAD. BRIEEEEEEEE
Okay okay okay my MIND IS GOING OVERDRIVE HERE, WOW, THAT ENDING
But, um...I just hope that Harakuise's hesitance was real. And he took ONE OF HER HANDS IN HIS
fUCK FUCK SHIT THAT WAS HORRIBLE IM SO SAD AND ANGSTY NOW

He has a lot of deep wounds, and they want him to RIDE THE FUCKING EAGLE
HOW FUCKING AMERICAN CAN THIS GET
Oh i'm just going to CASUALLY CLIMB ON THE BACK OF THIS MONSTROUS EAGLE, AND FLY OFF TO VICTORY
THEN HAVE THE FUCKING VOLCANO EXPLODE IN THE BACKGROUND, TO MAKE IT SEEM MORE BADAS A, MICHAEL BAY STYLE
Anyways, I think he took the rag doll that Sterling gave Brie...Or maybe Jai's toy soldier? I'd like to think it was the doll

And with that...Harakuise, the little psycho asshole who had a surprising amount of character development, is the Victor of the 9th Hunger Games!

Wow, that last section...Harakuise kept his promise, and got his men to take Jai to a safe place to 'prove his case'...
I feel so bad for Jai though. BRIE COULD HAVE WON IT ALL FOR HIM, IF NOT FOR HARAKUISE
kopycat101 chapter 37 . 8/18/2014
THIS WAS THE MOST BADASS, REALEST FUCKING INTERACTION BETWEEN VICTORS, HOLY CHEESE
I CANNOT EVEN WORDS HOW GREAT IT WAS THAT LANDOR BUST IN LIKE THAT, AND TRIED TO SNAP VESTER OUT OF IT.

I like Harakuise's inner monologue and thoughts. It's...well, still surprising, to me. His view on death- particularly on those close to him, whether emotionally or via distance in the Arena. Maybe he'll finally stop torturing poor animals, if he wins the Games, becomes tired, and doesn't partake in any of that bullshit any more. He'd become much more likeable.

Sterliiiiing, your section is making me really sad, damn it! ;_;
I DONT WANT HIM TO DIE, BUT HE'S IN SUCH TERRIBLE CONDITION THAT HE PROBLY WON'T MAKE IT

Ohhhh- So she HADN'T fled to the mountains, but towards THE 'mountain' aka the VOLCANO!
This makes much more sense. At first, I thought she met that huge flying fire monstrosity in the mountain, and I was just like 'ELLA, NO'
Well, at least the 'tree bending' is gone, and she has a plan...?

THIS SECTION WAS S OSFUCK ING SAD GOD FUCKIGN DAMN IT
STERLIIIIIIIING
*wails for eternity over Sterling* HE WAS ONE OF MY TOP FAVORITES I REALLY WANTED HIM TO WIN FOR HIS DAUGHTER OH YM GOD
AND THAT BRIELING MOMENT. FUCK. FUCK IT ALL TO HELL. THIS ISN'T FAIR- I SHOPULDN T BE THIS EMOTIONAL OVER FICTIONAL CHARACTERS
BRIE AND STERLING AND F UCKCFUCKFUCKCK

Okay...Okay. I'm calmer
Harakuise what the fuck...Are you making a gambit?
Either way, I like how he's turned around...I mean, his first section showed how much value he puts the other tributes before his own, how he's tired of fighting in the Games. And, well, him and Brie ARE District partners...Makes sense that he wants to talk
But is Brie going to...? Is she still shaken over Sterling's death? Is she more scared of Harakuise?

That last quote hit me hard again
*flies off away from earth* I just CANT live on this planet any longer
kopycat101 chapter 36 . 8/18/2014
Well, that scene of trees vs spiders sounded cool.
But...finally! Ella is getting off of her high horse, and realizing that the Hunger Games are SCARY, and she isn't safe!

Kiona...Zione...Oh this is TOO SAD FUCK ING SHIT
KIONA'S IN PAIN, STERLING'S IN PAIN, KIONA'S SLOWLY DYING BEFORE ZIONE'S EYES...
The...PARACHUTE?!
THOSE FUCKING TROLLS, SENDING IT AT THE LAST SECOND, HALLELUJA WAS IT POISON, OR WAS IT NOT ABLE TO SAVE KIONA, IM SO GOD DAMN CONFUSED
BUT THIS WAS SO FUCKING HEARTBREAKING. HOLY SHIT. KIONA. ZIONE. ZIOOOOOONE.
Zione's plotting and self-made 'honor' angle made me dislike him, but he's slowly grown on me to the point where I FEEL HIS ANGUISH, MAN
I LOVED HIS SPEECH, TOO. TELL EM, ZIONE. LET IT ALL OUT.
And he wanted to protect the others as a last FU to the Capitol. God fucking bless Zione. I bet he's going to die now :'/

Go, Brie! Save Sterling and yourself!
Although...It would have been smarter to take supplies, but I can understand why she was afraid because of Zione's tirade.
Nooooooo IT BETTER NOT BE STERLING THATS DEAD

Okay, I had a HUGE felling that Harakuise would somehow find his way to Zione and stick him in the back whilst he was ranting and sobbing over Kiona, and I was RIGHT
But dayum...I thought they were going to kill one another, and leave Brie, Sterling, and Ella...But HARAKUISE WAS LUCKY ENOUGH TO GET THE RIGHT SHOT TO SAVE HIS LIFE
WOOOOOOOOW
After all these chapters where Harakuise waited, and planned, to be able to go the Cornucopia to get supplies...He finally got his wish. D A M N, that's some karma russian roulette bs right there

Sterling and Brie are relatively safe...! Oh, thank goodness!
Although Sterling's still wounded, at least he's ALIVE, and with BRIE
BRIELING FOREVER

Hyde and Helius' interactions have become better with each passing one.
I suppose that this is true...These final four, right now, are perfect in terms that they won't cause too much trouble for the Capitol, and people love them/their stories
kopycat101 chapter 35 . 8/18/2014
Vester's interactions with the other Victors are really interesting and heartbreaking like wtf man, stop making me love you so much

Aight, this be bullshit. The Gamemakers are giving Harakuise fog-bending powers now? Him and Ella are already insane, and think themselves powerful, enough.
Although...Sigh, I had a feeling that Wulfric would head for the Cornucopia to go on a butchering spree...

Wulfric, my poor, broken son...
I suppose you do, in fact, have a choice of when to attack, when to die...But you're more feral animal now than human! Uwah!
And oh geeze, I wonder who he hit?!

Kiona's arm, eh...? Too bad that Kiona and Zione still work well with killing people, back from when they're kids...At least Wulfric chose the time of his death, I suppose. RIP my dark knight

Oh nooooo STERLING NOOOOO
At least he saved Brie bUT STILL, STERLING WHATCHA GONNA DO NOW?!
Well, good think Brie's still with him, so they were able to totally double-team...Equinox? It feels like Equinox.
Sterling managed to kill, to protect Brie and himself...But the wound on your side is a bigger thing to worry about!
And now...Brie vs Harakuise, no items, Final Destination

Harakuise, you dastardly smart bastard...
But he totally got his butt handed to him by Brie and Sterling! Cha!
But ohmy god...He's using that extra cannon and play possum...Shit, if they fall for it, Hara can definitely stick em!

Brieling more like CRIES OVER THEM, WHAT CARING CHILDREN, MY OTP
STERLING, STERLING YOU'RE TOO GOOD A PERSON, YOU WANT TO SACRIFICE YOURSELF FOR BRIE TO WIN AND STILL WANT TO BE SEEN AS A GOOD PERSON FOR YOUR DAUGHTER.
W HY IS THIS HAPPENING, MY HEART CANNOT TA KE THIS

Did...Did Harakuise just slip under their notice, through a plot hole...?
I bet Zione's carrying Kiona's corpse. And he doesn't want to consider he dead, just unconscious and wounded. Shit. sh it fuck shit
But almost all of the alliance is wounded, and whatever's in the marsh will KILL Sterling and Sterling's my SON and I WANT STERLING TO WIN DAMN IT

Ella. Ella, you're off the deep end. The tries are gonna die and the spiders will kill you, if the alliance doesnt manage it first

Jade and Ivy- the volunteer Victors...Make a nice couple. I deem them forever drink buddies, getting smashed to forget how dumb all the tributes are every year
kopycat101 chapter 34 . 8/18/2014
God DAMN it Vester, you're breaking my heart
Also, loving Mags and Vester's interactions like wtf. First Victor and Last one. Jeeze, they go scarily well

THERES TOO MUCH SADNESS AND REGRET AND ANGST WITH MY CHILDREN, NICOLENE AND WULFRIC
MY POOR, TRAUMATIZED CHILDREN
Also...Sniff...Pike really was a hero! Gah!

Ella, honey, no. You're going coocoo. No one can fucking tree bend! You're delusions are gonna get you killed!

Equinox, at this point, I don't think you should follow Harakuise...He's kind of going a bit mad, with having been under those hallucinogens
Ugh, Harakuise is going to go after Zione and Kiona, I can feel it

What if Abstract and Wulfric met in another life- they would totally go oddly well together
I like how baffled she is that someone spared her, considering that she's willing to just kill everyone, no matter who.
nO NICOLINE
SHE AND WULFRIC WERE SO CLOSE TO GETTING OUT AND SEEING SUNLIGHT TOO, FU CK
And now ITS FUCKING ON, ABSTRACT. Never even liked you much in the first place, bUT NOW WULFRICS GOTTA AVENGE NICOLINE, SO YOU'RE GOING DOWN
Rolling around- wowthatssomehugesexualtensiontheyhave *shot dead*
Abstract, you can't get away with killing someone's ally and having them spare you! That's not how it works!
Now Wulfric has no one to protect...*sob* My poor knight is a dark/blood-knight. WULFRIIIIC

WULFRIC'S FRUSTRATION AND UTTER DESPAIR MAKE ME SO SAD
MY BOY, NOOO
A gift...? Probably from killing Abstract and tHROWING HER CORPSE OVER THE SIDE OF THE MOUNTAIN IN PURE RAGE
Now he's going to have to be the BUTCHER, holy shit that's...That's against who he is, but he's already been put through so much, has no one precious left to protect...
I DONT CARE IF HES GOING TO TURN INTO A MERCILESS MONSTER, HE WAS THE MOST NOBLE OF THEM ALL AND I WILL STILL LOVE YOU WULFRIC

Well, this all sounds menacing...The arena's becoming more dangerous and smaller *shiver*
But hell yeah Brieling and the Brinkies. At least that's good, in all this insanity :')

I like the last section...Interesting spin you have there, to see who'd be the next Capitolite mentor for 9
kopycat101 chapter 33 . 8/18/2014
All the tributes are really scattered far about, and all in around the same amount of danger
But i feel that the vocano's going to erupt and kill Brie whilst she's dancing among the trees, tbh

Well, Hara's right about his little alliance not being popular with their mentors
Harakuise, don't you fucking dare go into the death-marsh you stupid little-
Nevermind, he did.
This can't be worth it, kid! It's can't!
And oh wow, he actually...Used the dead bodies to his advantage...Only someone as unstable as Harakuise would do it.
*shudder* and he envisions the skeleton being his dad, too

Well, at least Equinox managed to get his ally out of the marsh, and got the food
But Harakuise sounds like he's either high as a kite, or almost under anesthesia

RUN KIDDIES RUUUUUN! RUN FOR YOUR LIIIIVES!
Pike. PIKE NONONOON PIKE YOU CAN DO THIS FIGHT THE PAIN, RUN AFTER NICOLINE

Poor Nicoline- youre only thirteen...It makes sense why you're terrified, too!
Well, at least she finally found Wulfric! Yay- Wulfric's saving the day again! They're reunited!

PIIIIIIKE NOOOOOO
WULFRIC, DON'T BE A HERO
PIKE /O HYM GOD/
THIS IS AWFUKL THIS IS STERRIBLE FUFCKFUCK SHITSHIT
I CANOT FUCKIGN BELIEVE 'YOU SHALL NOT PASS 'WAS USED, THIS IS TOO MUCH LOTR AND TOO MUCH HEARTBREAK TO BE REAL
PIKEEEEEEEEE
WHA AT FTHE FUCK WHAT HTE FUCK WHY PIKE W HY
HOW CAN A DEATH BE SO BADASS AND HEARTWRENCHING AT THE SAME TIME, COMING FROM A TINY 12 YEAR OLD HOW IN THE *animalistic screeching*
I WILL /NEVER/ BE OVER PIKE'S DEATH OKAY JUST FUCKING BURY ME ALIVE

And then THE HUGE SPIDER COMES BACK
wHY. After Pike's traumatic death, and that HORRENDOUS MONSTER, you'd think there'd be enough mentally-scarring action to last
Run Kiona Run!

Wow, Brie sure knew what she was doing...It's good that she noted the spider was already injured, and had a plan!
But...Jumping on a spider...Ugh, that's so dangerous and creepy!
STERLING AND BRIE BETTER BE ALRIGHT, DESPITE BEING SHAKEN/THROWN OFF, I CANNOT HANDLE MORE DEATHS RIGHT NOW

Okay, that's good. The Family Alliance is injured, but alright
Good that Zione's finally starting to grow a heart, and feels attached to Brie and Sterling and thinks them as ALLIES and FRIENDS and PEOPLE. Yay, character development!

More wonderful Mags and Aron interaction.
I always want to give Aron a hug whenever he has a section because he's so great :')
kopycat101 chapter 32 . 8/18/2014
The little kiddies have a dilema on their hands...!
Good- they actually killed Angus, and got it over with...Together...*bawls over all three children*

There she is...Abstract's been really out of focus in this story, just chillin and hiding out
HOLY SHIT, SPIDER
Abstract, why not run away- I know it's not the best option, but you shouldn't take on a giant spider with a few knives! That's insane!

Wulfric GOING TO THE RESCUE, NANANANANA
That was TERRIFYING, BUT IM GLAD HE SURVIVED THAT
Wulfric...Leaving a crazy-prepared tribute who most likely killed someone, alive...? I mean, I'm glad that he's still got compassion, but...Really, his allies already killed someone defenseless, unarmed, who was a killer. It just makes this more ironic and sad.
Wulfriiiiiic, you're too good for the Games, gaaaah!

I like how Zione's just unconcerned about Sher, even after 3 cannons. Seems like Sher was annoying enough to get half the alliance to not care
Brie...Brie, baby, don't look down like that.
And STERLING TO THE RESCUE. LET THE SOFT, CUDDLY, WARM COMFORTING COMMENCE
Aklajsdlfkljd Brieling should just break off the alliance, they're too wonderful and great and noble and CRIES, I WANT ONE OF THESE WONDERFUL KIDS TO WIN

Harakuise is even more detached and creepier than usual...Just die and join your clever asshole boyfriend, Hara.
Pardeck fUCKING PLANNED THAT, OHMYGOD. THAT COULDNT HAVE BEEN COINCIDENCE. GIFT FOR ALDO FALLS IN THE DEEP PART OF THE MARSH, WHERE THE CORPSES THAT HIDE COME UP AND KILL HIM
AND HE WAS DOING SO WELL TOO FUCCKCKCK
Oh shit, this must have been in response to Equinox saying that he's rather have little kid Harakuise as his ally rather than Aldo, who wouldn't do all it would take
RIP ALDO, YOU MADE IT FAR FOR D12, SORRY FOR YOUR ASSHOLE BIOLOGICAL FATHER

Poor littles...You've both made it far...!
What's that ominous drum coming from? What is it? What'll happen next? Did someone start to play Jumanji or something?

That last section was oddly sad... How in the everlasting fuck did you manage to make PARDECK, of all people, seem sympathetic?!
But Aron will forever be amazing 10/10, you go grandpa
kopycat101 chapter 31 . 8/18/2014
I like the thought of Aron, Glenn, and Lander teaming up to get something to their tribute's alliance. They definitely need it, with Angus following them!

Ella, I like your analogy and all...But you're really getting delusional on thinking you REALLY have Tree-Bending powers, no matter HOW convincing...

Well NOW they believe Sher...And it's ironic they didn't believe him, when Kiona and Zione found animated corpses, haha
Sterling, my boy...You will forever be amazing. KEEP BEING AMAZING, STERLING
The alliance is still surprisingly holding up? Well, I suppose they'll just stay at the Cornucopia now...And maybe Sher can sneak away to Harakuise's proposition

Yaaaaay- the Kind Alliance got some goggles of their own! Yahoo!
I love how Libby was brave for her little allies...They're all wonderful children :')

Oh no nonono I KNEW he was going to act when they were sleeping!
Gack- poor Libby! But at least she managed to save her allies by thrashing and weighing Angus down! Looks like her size paid off!
Angus, this was a stupid decision. Why didn't he get them when it was early morning...? He was already very weak, he even pointed it out himself. That's how the two other little kids with no training and soft hearts managed to disarm and knock him out
But RIP Libby; you got surprisingly far, my girl :')

I fucking KNEW that Sher would go after Harakuise
And of COURSE he shows off, and gives all possible scenarios...Except for the OBVIOUS ONE- Harakuise killing him. Which I knew would happen. Honestly, Hara's too ruthless, needs the supplies, and would want Sher out of the way. YOU ARROGANT SCARF-WEARING MORONIC DORK
At least...I like Sher's death- fits him. And Harakuise concedes that Sher is a great mind, which is all the egotistical genius wanted.

That was...An odd turn, when it comes to Harakuise's thoughts. At first I thought he was a psycho mob boss- still is, but he really DOES enjoy a great mind, and wanted an EQUAL. And he found it in Sher, even after his death.
That's surprisingly sad and deep, man. It's all so oddly twisted and convoluted, but it makes sense. Sherkuise is my brotp now, wtf
Guest chapter 12 . 8/15/2014
I feel a strong connection to Glenn. Like, I feel as if I'd literally be him in a Games- tubby, goes unnoticed and somehow manages to outlast everyone, somehow winning the games.

But poor Libby. I feel like Glenn's gonna console her a lot, considering how much of a sobbing mess she is, and how she's also large.
And he does- He's to her rescue, when she faints. I feel so bad for both of them

I LOVE GLENN'S STUNT OF STAGEDIVING. WHAT A DORK. YOU PRECIOUS, PRECIOUS MAN.

But it was Libby's birthday...? Oh shit. That makes things worse *hugs her* MY POOR GIRL

Wulfric at least has the physique of a winner. Tall, strong, full of muscle. And worked in the slaughterhouse...That could come in handy
But I like how he's trying to cling to his sense of self. That he doesn't want to partake in it, think killing people would be like killing animals, and wants to keep his humanity. Reminds me of Peeta's dilemma. I like him!

But also Kudos to have Blood tie all three of them together, as a theme.
kopycat101 chapter 30 . 8/17/2014
Well, Ella always wanted to keep in her emotions, because her emotions cost her...And they did; her two allies.
But I like how Mags understands Ella, and is trying her best to gain sponsors for the girl, even if the reasoning isnt true
Hope Ella can turn herself around!

Oh, the kids are right...I suppose they were just a bit too safe, in their happy little beach. Going through the caves sounds like a sound a plan as any

Abstract's in a predicament, but she should be okay for a few hours...
Wulfric HAD been right. She's numb, despite everything. Only there for revenge.

Yay Sterling- keep being skeptical! It'll help you in the end to stay alive!
But what the fuck, Zione, Kiona...They leave the Cornucopia unguarded, and they may lose all of the items inside from people running in to make a break for it.
Hopefully, Brie and Sterling go off whilst they have the water and break away from the alliance. Brieling can do it!
But- pfffff, they think Kiona and Zione are an item. Well SURPRISE, MOTHERFUCKER, THEY'RE LONG-LOST SIBLINGS s o thats actually got some creepy incest vibes whoops
Also, I wonder why Sher didn't volunteer to go to the marsh instead, so he could look at the 'challenge'. But it's better to warn them not to go towards the mountains-edge of the marsh

Ooooh, dead Capitol soldiers in the marsh, springing on Kiona and Zione... Ohoho, Helius definitely knows of them, hoho

Oh myGOD NONONOONON DONT KILL THEM DONT KILL ANY OF MY PRECIOUS CHILDREN
Phew...It looks like the Gamemakers just wanted to make some suspense, and seal off the cave. Just wanted some of them to split
For a horrible moment, there, I thought Wulfric was gonna DIE and that made my panic. But this is better
You can do it, Libby! You can help the little kiddies, and find a way out of the caves!
But Abstract is probably prowling around there...I think they saw her earlier, or maybe Angus, in the entrance of a cave near the lake...

Maybe you should, Lordez...He's too much of a genius for this Game anyway! But I have a distinct feeling that the trees are going to catch them...
DAMN IT, SHER, THIS IS WHY WE CANT HAVE NICE THINGS
And ELLA. Knew she was still in here, but man! She suddenly appeared!
oH NO HOLY DAMN. Ella, after coming out of the 'tree mutts nearly killed me experience', can now fucking TREE BEND. I bet this is the gamemaker's award for Ella surviving the trees, and killing her allies. (I was right)
Of COURSE Lordez wouldn't come out of that alive, no matter if it was just her alone or with Ella. Hot damn. Ella's gotten farther than I expected her too

Man, these gamemakers are quickly forcing the tributes together, and drastically chancing the Arena already. It's barely Day 2, people!
I liked the status updates on the tributes, though. I was wondering what was happening with them...
The 'weak' alliance better be careful, because of Angus...The 'family' alliance is down to 5- and could even drop down to 4 (if Sher goes to the marsh/mountains and dies) or 3 (if Brie and Sterling leave). Harakuise is a masterful bastard, and I bet his plan involving Sher will go somewhere.
kopycat101 chapter 29 . 8/17/2014
There's some tension already in the 'family' pack. Brie and Sterling already have an inkling of how wrong it is to be the 'wolves' and stay around the Cornucopia to fight others.
Strategically, it makes sense to stay around the Cornucopia. However, it's good that Brie and Sterling realize that Zione may not be all he's cracked up to be, and are wary of the others. I can see them banning together and splitting from the group, before things go south. They can hide in the cool forest. Brieling could do it
But Zione already being annoyed by Sher is hilarious 10/10

Poor Lina...Gah, she's right! They should keep running, no where's safe
But Cahra is, again, violent and a bit stupid. Good thing Ella's there to play mediator, and be logical. The forest is a great place, full of resources.

I LOVE WULFRIC, YOU GO WULFRIC, WORK WITH THE 'WEAK' ALLIANCE AND PROTECT LIBBY LIKE THE WONDERFUL MAN YOU ARE
I mean, these three are just so human and gentle that they didnt consider a large turtle to be food. He helps them, and they help keep him sane. WHAT A GOOD ALLIANCE

Holy shit the TREES WERE MUTTS, THE TREES CAME ALIVE
KILLED LINA
THEN CAHRA TRIED TO LIGHT THE TREES ON FIRE, AND ELLA KILLED HER ON INSTINCT
HOLY SHIT
Well, Lina sure was right that the forest wasn't safe! Holy hell...
And ironically, fire killed Cahra in the most unexpected of ways. Jesus

Harakuise is too smart and savvy, but his creepy logically sound mind is making me like him a bit more. Which is concerning.
But it seems that Equinox is a more savvy to Harakuise's thought process, since Aldo was a last-day addition. Not surprised that Hara would want to try duping/catching Sher's attention.

Lordez and Sher are too smart/lucky. They could have been a genius crime duo, in another life
Sterling, just take the fucking blanket and snuggle with it. You deserve at least something, my poor man
Oh my god, the someone actually listened to Harakuise, and sent that message to Sher...Sher and his meeting will be interesting, at the very least
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