Reviews for Quickening
KhAeL chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
This is such a cute and sweet one-shot, you can never get tired of some MakoHaru lovin'!
featherdusters chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
so, so cute! pretty good for unbeta-ed work
admiring lurker chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
I love how you portrayed them both! */* I find it hard to find Haru written in a way I really like, and I just super duper enjoyed the way you showed the multifaceted nature of his hard-to-read personality... Imagining his facial expressions was perfect. x) I also like that you fit so many little canonical details/traits into the story-those things really made it feel like their personalities were accurately written. Thank you! xoxo
Neko-Chaann chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
MERP
maripas chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
ohhh what a kawaiii chapter 3 it's so nice ioiii I really liked it I hope to read more of your stories soon ) Thank you for writing.
NyxLied chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
That was so sexy. I like how shy and delicious Haru is, and Mako tried to be as gentle as possible. They're so made for each other and both such a hot couple. OMG I hope you write more smut. Try a multi-chapter next time! You're s great writer and would love to see more hot stories from you
mochiusagi chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Hehehehhehehe Makoto got his wish after al, especially in such a great way.
Aiasaka chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
I loved it! Well written and so hot...
Thanks for sharing!
Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Loved it! Very sweet
CanaanAlphardForever chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
That was really well written. You did their personalities much justice, and I can really see them acting like they did in this if it happened in canon. It was also really sweet. Thank you
merinxD chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
This was good. I really enjoyed it. The characters worked well and the language features were on point. Though, I do disagree with you about Haru being the initiator. We all have our own head canons of course. xP I feel that events can change circumstances, so I like to explore with both dynamics. Are you going to write more for this fandom? It would be really cool to see some more from you. Are you on AO3? That's where Free! is happening atm. The fics on there are great quality, and I think yours would look well with the bunch. :) Love your Makoto. Good luck and happy writing.
Mikitsu Kisa-chan chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
THANK YOU. THANK YOU SO MUCH! I've been reading Makoaharu fanfictions on and off for the last few hours and this is the only
Verafied63 chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Hottttttt