|Reviews for Endless|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Oh my god. No. No. No. So many feels right now. I can't. I- no. I can't. Gahh! NO!
| Fire The Canon chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooo. Why? I was just really getting into this pairing and thought it was adorably beautiful and I just wanted to tackle hug Sirius, and then... and then he was gone. And he couldn't even listen to her... stuid, stupid, stupid.
I love this Ami. I thought it was lovely, and Sirius' hurt was just djfwjnjkk. I'm squeeing. Really. Ahudfwjwjjkjkw.
It was written perfectly, of course, and just beautiful and sweet, and you just broke my heart :(
| yellow 14 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
The biggest problem with this story is that the characters sound as though they belong in America, not Britain. Converse sneakers for example are out and out American and wouldn't exist in the UK during the seventies. Equally, the phrase bail was not in use. As for Sirius's reaction...it feels a bit off
That said, your oc's background is good and I like her doubts. Keep writing
| Moon Lantern chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
That was kind of sad and angsty, clearly Sirius was upset and maybe there was something more there, but now they're both upset!
I think you need to conclude this, definitely!
Oh, and check the grammar. You've put "I/me" and even "He" when I think you mean "she/her". Apart from that, thumbs up!
| Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
very interesting story. nice use of detail.