Reviews for Pheryll 90 Part 1: Vostok's Attempt
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Thank you for a lovely story! It was really nicely written, coming up with interesting ideas, with lots of action and a delicate touch of romance. If I were to advise anything, that would only be to work on some parts to make it longer, more explanatory, to slow down the chaotic descriptive action. I would add more psychology of the characters, deepen some dialogues and add more detailed descriptions of the surroundings. Thank you for sharing, you're a star! Regards, Hanna
SAR chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
Not bad. Interesting story.