Reviews for Inevitable
Incomplete Anon chapter 10 . 9/19
Shit, sorry, my earlier review ended like mid sentence. So what I was saying was - I'm glad that slowly but surely he is recovering...and he'll be better. He'll be good. AND MIKE! YASS! I literally died when I read that sentence, because I know how much his death affected Jesse and just...he was the only real non-manipulative father figure in his life.. I'M SO GLAD YOU BROUGHT MIKE BACK! Thank you for the last few sentences. I just..I had to write this, I had to.
Guest chapter 10 . 9/19
Omg, your fix was just so fulfilling, I mean, after Felina, It seemed as though everything had worked out, except...Jesse. I mean, it had, to a certain extent, bit I really just wanted him to get away, and he safe and be happy... preferably with Brock. And this, this fix just gives a sort of an AU but very realistic closure to Jesse's situation. I loved the way it was written, how it progressed, and how you mentioned the after effects, the PTSD. I also realised that of Walter burned the lab, the police wouldn't be able to find Jesse's fingerprints all over it, so hurray for that! And I'm glad he gets to talk about it..about everything with _SOMEONE_. And slowly bit
Anna chapter 6 . 8/16/2014
They turned off the electricity but not the water?
Guest chapter 10 . 6/21/2014
Yay! I love the thought that Jesse got to live a happy life after the season finale. Wonderfully written. Thank you :)
Guest chapter 9 . 6/21/2014
This was great!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/21/2014
Oh no! Poor Jesse. Great chapter!
Guest chapter 7 . 6/21/2014
It would make sense that Jesse would have extreme PTSD after all he's been through. I like how you've incorporated that.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/21/2014
Wow. Great chapter!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/20/2014
Great chapter!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/20/2014
Oh no! This is getting really good!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/20/2014
I just love reading about these two interacting with each other. It's so tense!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/20/2014
Poor Jesse. He's been through so much. I love how you express Walter conflict with the state of Jesse.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
This is great! I can't wait to read more :)
anna chapter 10 . 12/10/2013
Well done, great story! :-)
Nightwalkerin86 chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
Really great story. I love the happy ending. Good work! ;)
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