|Reviews for A Dark Speedster: 74X-2D89|
| GUEST chapter 9 . 1/16
Can You Please Continue?
| aDodoBird chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Barry is a nice guy. He's not the angry rager type at all. I can't see him doing what you described here. But a reasonably good start to the story for sure!
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/24/2013
This so great. I fell so sorry for Wally and is uncle and aunt. And Chicho is so cool to and they have great food.
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/21/2013
| Brendanmudk chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
I'm always wondering why is it that people seem to think that Wally's parents are evil or uncaring. I know they were like that in the comics but they were obviously not in Earth-16. Still, a lot of good stories come of this concept, so I will keep reading. By the way, I can't help but notice how much of a universal chew toy Wally seems to be.
| Alecy Magix chapter 7 . 11/3/2013
I am surprised that Richard didn't track the phonebooth number. And it seems no one told Roy yet; i see disaster in the future, hevey on the dis. love this story hope you update soon.
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/31/2013
And the biggest jerk award goes to...Rudy and Mary! Who would've thought?! Lol
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/29/2013
hey what if wally left a journal of sorts on the laptop. it was his form of realease beside beating up badies of course. save wally!
| Windschild8178 chapter 6 . 10/22/2013
Holy hell. Amazing! Birds singing gloriously in the background. I have to say I was a little board last chapter, too many Ocs that I don't care about. Last chapter, I suspect, was just that it would have been more interesting if you'd shown us something about Wally's personality through the revealing of Ocs. Something that's very Wally even when his memories are fried. Maybe he could have fidgeted in super speed, surprising everyone, maybe he could have talked to fast or interrupted someone accidentally, but focusing entirely on the Ocs was a bit dull. Super glad that this chapter was so amazing! You really pulled off all the right stops and I have to say that your reporter (despite being someone the fans are generally unfamiliar with) did her job well. She was obsessed with the idea of finding out a secret we already knew about. We wanted her to figure it out so therefore we all cheered her on in our heads. You know what I mean?
The ocs from last chapter though... honestly they could all have sobs stories and I wouldn't care. With Ocs you have to be very careful though... You can't just out right jump out and tell us their back stories like that. You have to make us care about them, make them interesting and their interactions with the main characters remarkable, before you tell us their past, because then we're sitting at the edge of our seats. And I'm not saying this to be mean, I can't wait to see what happens next, but just for future reference I'd take that into consideration.
You story honestly has an intriguing premise and great characterization of Wally himself. I do beg you though, to make scenes with Wally about Wally, and using his real name even if he himself doesn't know it. It's fine when others are referring to him by his numbers, but we as readers have a very hard time keeping up with that. Wally has to stay Wally through the whole thing. You know what I mean?
Just some friendly suggestions from a co-author. Wishing you the best of luck and looking forward to your next chapter! I hope to see you expanding on all the scenes you have in this chapter. Their all superb pieces of work.
| lesbianmagari chapter 6 . 10/22/2013
Rudolph is a little delusional; nice that Wally's team cares for him. Like how you have the team brainstorming; Wally's parents are so bad. Great chapter.
| Mysty Star chapter 6 . 10/22/2013
Wow. You did an excellent job with this, seriously. I'm not sure what i expected, but this was great! I was very pleasantly surprised. I never thought of a storyline like this either. Very original. Excellent job, definitely keep going!
| RollingUpHigh chapter 6 . 10/22/2013
Oh man, are you putting in the Manhunters?! And Dick should really stop trying to come up for excuses for his actions.
| tsurara619 chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
Wow! just wow! I wonder how Artemis and Barry are gonna react when they find out what really happened to Wally...
| Charlene Heo chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
Oh my god this was AMAZING! It was all crafted and planned so beautifully. I can't wait to see what kind if reaction out heroes will have if they ever run into Wally as 74X!
The OCs sound really interesting! I can't wait to see where this will lead for Wally! The title really caught my interest!
And I'm glad you chose not to focus a Romance into this story— it would be pretty pointless, and I hate those.
Can't wait to see what else you've got in store!
| TeahTheFoxLover chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
Oh gosh, this is a really great story.
I like the twist you gave with King's facility, tho it remains to be seen if it's good or bad. Honestly, I've already seen a few stories where Wally gets amnesia and is used as a tool for the bad guys, so it's refreshing to see (at least what appears to be) a facility that actually uses him to fight against gangs and such because the current JL system is inefficient, instead of pitting them against the League. And I like how you're holding out on us with the League finally discovering what's going on - it's a lot better than just dumping it all in the first three chapters to get a reaction from the readers :D
This is all so mysterious, can't wait to find out what it is all about. Maybe one of his new teammates is actually another DC character? I'll eagerly await any new updates _