Reviews for A Hobbit's Tale
blackcat711 chapter 13 . 3/28/2017
I always forget how much I love this story until I re-read it. So sweet those two ️
Persephoniii chapter 13 . 6/18/2016
Very sweet. I love Prim. I love that she is so sweet and humble, and I especially like that you didn't try to force-write her into the journey with the dwarves, simply for the sake of having her there. (as many writers try to do with OC's) You wrote Bilbo PERFECTLY, and gave him a mate who perfectly complimented him. Even though the story is listed as 'unfinished', I think this chapter does end it on a positive note (tho I wonder if they'll have children)
Chicken Year chapter 13 . 11/21/2014
Yay! Really enjoy this and glad I stumbled across this. Super cute and I'm actually grateful you didn't write any smut. It's not something I'm into and usually ruins a story for me! So thank you for that! Please update soon! :)
jesasaurus93 chapter 13 . 10/28/2014
Love how you are givingBilbo some love. Update again soon
xxxMadameMysteryxxx chapter 13 . 9/5/2014
Gr8 chapter and I hope u include Bilbo and Primrose having a child cuz I think a child would stregthen their happy marriage, plz update soon : )
punky warhammer chapter 2 . 5/13/2014
i know this sounds made up but my mother's aunt and one of her son's had a green eye and a hazel eye. it was startling and so cool to see for the first time. thank you for reminding me of them.
Genevieve Darcy Granger chapter 13 . 4/7/2014
This ship is adorably cute. And I love how Prim handled Thorin.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/29/2014
ro781727 chapter 13 . 1/17/2014
Primrose's love could be a decisive factor in Bilbo being better able to fight the Ring's hold on him than in canon.
MateriaGirl16 chapter 11 . 12/21/2013
I think you should change it to M or just make another story for it. Ether way it shall be wondeful! Hey I love the story a lot! I wou've wrote a review for the other ones, but I go so hooked. You have lovely writing it just flows and sounds great. Love Prim! Keep on writing I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
wolviegurl chapter 13 . 11/23/2013
Great story, please update again soon.
ratherbereading125 chapter 12 . 11/4/2013
I'm glad you didn't get graphic with the sex scenes. Partly because Hobbits aren't sexual creatures in the first place. They're meant to be simple and sweet, and we know they have sex because there are little baby and child Hobbits running around, but it's kind of like female dwarves; it's better left vague.
Tolwen chapter 13 . 10/28/2013
They're so sweet together, can't wait to see more!
Tolwen chapter 9 . 10/28/2013
Awww! Hooray!
Tolwen chapter 7 . 10/28/2013
Sorry for not reading this sooner. Awww, Prim is so sweet! Poor Prim!
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