|Reviews for First year back|
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 18 . 4/14
Stasia R. Ravenclaw
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/21
I got as far as Chapter 2, but cannot go on.
I think your story is very good, but it is very hard to follow, as the grammar and sentence structure is awful. You repeat parts of a sentence, within the same sentence, and (a lot of the time) the meaning of the words is lost. There are other problems too, but that is the one that jumps out.
I suggest a Beta-Reader, to improve and fine-tune things
| Veritas Sanctus chapter 18 . 3/20
You are magnificent and I love your writing. Please do continue.
| Hainbuche chapter 18 . 1/2
schöne geschichte. happy ends sind toll. lg hayne
| countrylovinfangirl chapter 18 . 10/14/2014
| DemeRain chapter 18 . 9/22/2014
Thanks for sharing.
| whitebuffalowmn chapter 18 . 8/25/2014
| TheCauldron chapter 6 . 8/16/2014
I think you meant masochist, not sadist. Though taking Severus without prep might make a liar out of me... Lol
| shadewatcher chapter 18 . 7/19/2014
Muwahhahahahahaa! Should have never of messed with Harry Potter! XD
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
So he figures out he's gay, but instead of being some one decent and going after the man he likes, he becomes a slut.
How fucking peachy.
I didn't spend time looking for a Harry and Snape story to read about him fucking other people.
You should have put a HP/SS EVENTUALLY warning in your summary, so people like me wouldn't bother to read this shit.
| thewolf74 chapter 18 . 6/14/2014
Wow. I loved Harry's revenge. I'm happy that the ones that were hurting and using Harry were arrested and charged.
| KLS-Blueskies chapter 4 . 5/26/2014
I love bold and rebellious Harry :) hehehehe
| EzioPhamtomCreed409 chapter 18 . 5/25/2014
this was a great story there should have been an epilog like saying a few years down the way
| Kaya70 chapter 18 . 4/19/2014
Love it so much
| Elementalearthwolf101 chapter 18 . 4/11/2014